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Aug. 3, 2025    11.44am

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Len Gasun Date: 8/30/2025 8:43:00 PM Illusku : Illustrated Haiku Challenge Contest Judged: 8/28/2025 7:40:00 AM Sponsored by: JCB Brul Place 1 (up to 3rd multi-w & HM) Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/30/2025 3:52:00 AM Creative winning work. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K Login to Reply

Speaks Volumes Date: 8/28/2025 3:00:00 PM So grand I can almost see the spectacular colours. A beautiful entry, well done. Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 8/31/2025 2:13:00 AM Thank you dear poet friend for reading my poem and your inspiring words. Blessings to you always. Hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/28/2025 9:49:00 AM - Fantastically shaped ... a wonderful picture in words and art, Len - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 8/30/2025 8:58:00 PM Thank you so much my dear poet friend Anne-lise for reading my poem, your inspiring words and warm congratulatory greetings. God bless you and big congrats as well on your first place win! Hugs and cheers!

Valsa George Date: 8/28/2025 9:46:00 AM Wow ....! So amazing! Hearty Congratulations. Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 8/30/2025 8:50:00 PM Thanks a lot my dear poet friend Valsa. I think you won too and the other many contests. Congratulations too. Sorry for coming late. But I'm on my way to your page now. Thanks again. Hugs

Trina Layne Date: 8/24/2025 9:05:00 AM This is impressive, Len. Well done! Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 8/30/2025 8:40:00 PM Thanks for reading it and your inspiring words my dear poet friend Trina. God bless you always. Hugs

Kim Rodrigues Date: 8/4/2025 1:40:00 PM Wow! You outdid yourself! Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 8/10/2025 12:30:00 AM Thank you so much my dear poet friend Kim, for another visit. I came here also to continue the tail. I hope I can have more energy to finish it lol. Sorry for coming onlly now because of time constraint. Again, thanks and God bless you always. Hugs

John Fleming Date: 8/3/2025 3:10:00 PM The fantastic art aside...this really is a marvellous little piece of poetry. I find it very appealing...all of it. Nicely done! :) john Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 8/9/2025 11:57:00 PM Thank you so much for visiting my page and your uplifting comment on my illustrated haiku my dear poet friend, John. Sorry for coming only now to express my gratitude coz of time constraint. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Bill Baker Date: 8/2/2025 11:03:00 PM A FAV for this fantastic, creative poem, Len. I admire your patient to create this. This form of poetry is beyond my skill level. I think you could have used Shape Poetry as the form. Of course, Other works fine. :-) Hugs, Bill Login to Reply Len Gasun Date: 8/3/2025 6:28:00 AM Oh, thank you so much my dear poet friend Bill for reading and the fave. In fact, I got tired/lazy of finishing the tail LOL. I used the form others coz it's one of contest rules, if I'm not mistaken. Again, thank you so much. I'll visit you again soon. Happy wkend/new wk ahead! Hugs