Peacock

Green and golden vibrantly shines on soft red lines as summer dew is gentle blue The hues of the peacock feather in all weather fills one with love in gentle cove Silver blessings fall from above labour of love feathers unfold a bird of gold 10/10/12 By- Tahera Mannan Contest- Just A Minute!

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Saurabh Gupta

Date: 12/13/2012 10:24:00 PM

lovely done...nie write..........

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/29/2012 6:23:00 AM

Congratulations on your super placement in Nette's "Just A Minute" contest Tahera. Love, Carol

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 10/27/2012 8:30:00 PM

I really enjoyed reading this. We have a small zoo here in Waterloo, really small. But we have some albino peacocks. It is almost sad, really, to see, as though they have been denied their purpose. Odd thought? Perhaps. Wonderful words you've smithed here. Congrats on your win, Smiles from Cyndi

Irfana Ali Bhat

Date: 10/27/2012 11:29:00 AM

u hv beautifully described a peacock...congrats on ur win....:))

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2012 9:40:00 AM

I remember this gem!! Big congrats in the contest, sweetie.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 10/27/2012 3:56:00 AM

Big congratulations once again Tahera, well done xx

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/26/2012 9:28:00 PM

Tahera, congratulations in Nette's "JUST A MINUTE!" contest.. wishing you well.. xox~PD

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/26/2012 8:38:00 PM

CONGRATS TAHERA ON A MAGNIFICENT WRITE AND WIN LUV .. AWESOME .

Joseph May

Date: 10/26/2012 6:11:00 PM

congrats on your win Tahera

Kash Poet

Date: 10/13/2012 10:18:00 AM

Beautiful poem Tahera!Lovely read.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2012 3:24:00 PM

You nicely depicted the peacock with this little poem Tahera. I just love that exotic looking bird!! Good choice!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/10/2012 3:06:00 PM

Tahera, this is a lovely poem - the air is filled with love. -Wish you luck in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/10/2012 10:47:00 AM

Another gem from you Tehera, this is so lovely,,,,,,,,,,,

Jack Horne

Date: 10/10/2012 9:20:00 AM

yes, they are such beautiful birds and a beautiful write - Congrats on your wins, my friend : )

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/10/2012 8:06:00 AM

I think that the Peacock is a beautiful bird..I noticed on the internet that there a those that are of white coloring..Great write to honor them..Thanks for congrats on my win..Sara