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Peach Pie Guy

Left over peach pie, he embraced No loss of money and great taste Gobbled down With no frown Ironically still went to waist!

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 9/6/2019 10:24:00 AM

Peach pie is one of my favorites - the last line was not 'waisted'!

Pat Adams
Date: 9/6/2019 5:13:00 PM

Thanks Michelle! Peach pie is my #1!!...I'm glad the last line wasn't wasted since it's a pretty important line in a limerick!!!.......Have a great day!!......pat

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/6/2019 7:16:00 AM

My pleasure.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/5/2019 9:31:00 AM

Ha ha, I like your sense of humour.

Pat Adams
Date: 9/5/2019 11:38:00 PM

Well, it makes me happy that you like it!...Thanks for commenting Richard!......80)

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 9/2/2019 10:18:00 PM

G'day Pat … you really are on a campaign to tighten the English language - loved this limerick of yours - Lindsay

Pat Adams
Date: 9/3/2019 7:15:00 AM

Is that what I'm doing? HuH!! Ok!.....thanks for commenting Lindsay!

Hello There

Date: 9/1/2019 10:28:00 PM

Salivating here... the pie looks so delicious!! Better to let some things go to waist, I suppose. As long as you do so with grace ;) Cute piece! (Your writing, not the pie!!)

Pat Adams
Date: 9/2/2019 3:46:00 PM

I think the pie's cute too, but I'm up for a few more sit ups to even the score!.......Thanks Hello! .....pat

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/1/2019 4:12:00 PM

LOL! Just peachy!

Pat Adams
Date: 9/2/2019 3:42:00 PM

I see what you did there!.....80) Thanks!!.....pat

Jan Allison

Date: 9/1/2019 12:55:00 PM

oh such clever word play Pat:-) hugs Jan xx

Pat Adams
Date: 9/2/2019 3:41:00 PM

Thanks Jan! They always have apple and cherry, but I hold out for the peach! Thanks for commenting!....pat