Peach Pie Guy

Left over peach pie, he embraced
No loss of money and great taste
Gobbled down
With no frown
Ironically still went to waist!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Faulkner Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 10:24 AM
Peach pie is one of my favorites - the last line was not 'waisted'!
Adams Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 5:13 PM
Thanks Michelle! Peach pie is my #1!!...I'm glad the last line wasn't wasted since it's a pretty important line in a limerick!!!.......Have a great day!!......pat
Lamoureux Avatar
September 6, 2019 at 7:16 AM
My pleasure.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 9:31 AM
Ha ha, I like your sense of humour.
Adams Avatar
September 5, 2019 at 11:38 PM
Well, it makes me happy that you like it!...Thanks for commenting Richard!......80)
Laurie Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 10:18 PM
G'day Pat … you really are on a campaign to tighten the English language - loved this limerick of yours - Lindsay
Adams Avatar
September 3, 2019 at 7:15 AM
Is that what I'm doing? HuH!! Ok!.....thanks for commenting Lindsay!
There Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 10:28 PM
Salivating here... the pie looks so delicious!! Better to let some things go to waist, I suppose. As long as you do so with grace ;) Cute piece! (Your writing, not the pie!!)
Adams Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 3:46 PM
I think the pie's cute too, but I'm up for a few more sit ups to even the score!.......Thanks Hello! .....pat
Rodrigues Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 4:12 PM
LOL! Just peachy!
Adams Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 3:42 PM
I see what you did there!.....80) Thanks!!.....pat
Allison Avatar
September 1, 2019 at 12:55 PM
oh such clever word play Pat:-) hugs Jan xx
Adams Avatar
September 2, 2019 at 3:41 PM
Thanks Jan! They always have apple and cherry, but I hold out for the peach! Thanks for commenting!....pat
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