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Peaceful Prater

The pop corn patter of spring rain slathering the landscape curling the fern fronds closing the dandelion’s ruff gully washers speed through stone stream beds marsh mallow yellow flowers the lowlands and a misty burgeoning peace settles over a fresh May day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/8/2010 12:23:00 PM
Wow! May in all its splendor twirls, dancing through this poem. Beautiful! Love, Dane
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Date: 6/1/2010 2:45:00 PM
The old enchantment teasing the chained demons again. Exquisite!
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Date: 6/1/2010 9:57:00 AM
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Date: 6/1/2010 9:54:00 AM
Dear Light and LOVE, Deborah,A great May day POEM.I must say YOU have inspired me to Write a May Day POEM but From a MOUNTAIN top Is That OK Superb POETIC Artistry : ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG SOUP MAIL CALL
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Date: 6/1/2010 8:51:00 AM
Very nice deborah(How do I find out box/send a messaghe to: for soup mail? ) Could I have a catch phrase please !!!?~~Rick
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Date: 6/1/2010 8:42:00 AM
Marvelous writing Deborah. Our May here in Northwest was so fresh it is now soggy. Looking forward to June. May I have one of your catch phrases? Love, Joyce
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