Peaceful Contentment of the Mind

That we could dance upon the dew dry grass  
beneath a bluish sky with little cloud, 
we listen to the music grand as brass
as clapping cheered us from the evening crowd.
	
How quickly we fatigue, age takes its toll,
Returning to a shady place to rest,  
we must pay for all pleasures which we stole,  
a glass of cold beer will gladden us best.

Red sunset form on the far ocean wide,  
silently we trudge to an austere shrine. 
We approach silently our heads held high,  
enjoying fragrances of the great pines. 

Our lives we must mend with much endeavour
pray to the Lord for mercy forever.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Rodrigues Avatar
November 30, 2020 at 5:29 AM
Love this line: we must pay for all pleasures which we stole
Crabtree Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 6:15 PM
Back to read this one again, Victor. Great poem. Wishing you a great week :)
Horsman Avatar
November 29, 2020 at 12:57 AM
poetic magic, just to read this, The title says it all, at the end yes, a feeling of contentment...
One Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 6:20 AM
I thought I had commented on this... A lovely sonnet my friend... it flows well and nice choice for rhymes..
Roper Avatar
November 28, 2020 at 12:06 AM
Beautiful inspiring Sonnet, Victor. Great imagery with romantic emotions and age. Hugs Eve
Andresen Avatar
November 27, 2020 at 2:18 AM
- You're right, Victor ... a beautiful poem with your description ... (I was not at the soup yesterday) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
November 26, 2020 at 5:59 PM
this truly evokes that peaceful contentment of your title, Victor. What a lovely display of enjoying nature with one's loved one in the twilight years.
Cunningham Avatar
November 26, 2020 at 1:23 AM
So true Victor, age takes its toll, but lovely to look back at the pleasures we stole. Like the idea too, of a cool glass of beer whilst doing so. Tom
Buehler Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 11:13 PM
I love the way you describe scenes, Victor. This one is so tranquil and lovely, evoking sights, scents and sounds to add to the romantic reflections. :)
Crabtree Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 6:43 PM
A beautiful write, Victor. Life does take its toll on us. Great memories :)
Pandit Avatar
November 25, 2020 at 11:26 AM
The first stanza speaks to youthful joy of life. But age has its plans and winds of change begin to flow--when outlook changes as well. Great depiction, Victor, how life makes our choices.
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