Peace Midst Angst

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Plagued with crises angst heart fakes gloomy countenance yet faith sparks hope smile glowing midst God's sublime peace* to radiate triumph bliss. *2Thessalonians 3:16 Now the Lord of peace himself give you peace always by all means. The Lord be with you all. June 1, 2021 5th place, "Tanka" Poetry Writing Contest Sponsored by M. L. Kiser; judged on 6/3/2021.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/7/2021 2:45:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your faith based winning work. Congrats. Christians have an internal joy that those that are not Christians understand. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/4/2021 5:34:00 PM

Very nice, Beata. Uplifting ending. Congrats.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/3/2021 10:27:00 AM

What a wonderful blessing to all of us Beata. Faith does "spark hope." And peace is triumphant "bliss." This is a very special tanka my friend. It has brightened my day and given me a gentle smile. Congratulations on your win!

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 6/1/2021 5:34:00 AM

Wonderful lovely verse good luck in the contest~ James : )