James Fraser Poet Rhyme

Peace, Like the Still Pond

The glass like effect i see on ponds
Is earths peace, nature need not respond
How awesome it would be for this image to stay
For warring countries, to bow and pray
 
Neighbour's get on in harmony
Be at peace as it should be
Families love and get along
As we do more rights and fewer wrongs
 
Lives to spin and revolve, as our modern world turns
To stand up proud, as we live and learn
Honour peace as we all respond
Peace, like the still Pond


Inspired by Raul's " Nature's Reflections "

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Debbie Guzzi May 27, 2009 at 10:39 AM wonderful sentiment..last line Peace like the surface of a still, deep, pond...don't let the message dibble off..(tickle) Light & Love

Daver Austin May 27, 2009 at 7:20 AM The image is great! I like positive, placid stuff in the face of world violence. Love, daver

Lena Townsend May 26, 2009 at 9:11 PM Awesome imagery friend. Well done. Smiles from Lolita

Constance La France May 26, 2009 at 6:26 PM Would it not be wonderful, the live in that peaceful world, like the still pond... beautiful write

Brandy Megens May 26, 2009 at 3:28 PM beauty in another work of art great job with imagery james i am calm and at ease when i read your poems

Carolyn Devonshire May 26, 2009 at 3:11 PM Amen to the thoughts you convey so well here, James. If nature can reflect peace, then man should be able to reflect it in his actions, too. Excellent writing once more! Love, Carolyn