Sara Kendrick Poet Sonnet

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Peace, Joy, Contentment

Bright stars that shone behind the clouds  
Magical fireworks lit the sky
New hopes and dreams danced round unshroud
While uncertainty tore the heart
Leaving stains 'pon the blue lined sheet
New Year can be an awesome start

Peace, joy, contentment slipped right through
An assurance no matter what
Everything good will soon breakthrough
New Year ride the light of sparklers
Dance round uncensored and uncut
Break off borders, release blinders

Bright stars that shone behind the clouds
Peace, joy, contentment slipped right through

Written: January 02, 2016
Sponsor: Craig Cornish
Contest: Cornish Sonnet
Theme: New Year~~~Think outside the box!!!
8 syllables per line( If I can count to 8)

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Pashang Salehi January 25, 2016 at 1:32 AM Sara, I liked this Sonnet of yours a lot. Nicely done

Poet Destroyer A January 22, 2016 at 11:55 PM SARA, CONGRATS ON YOUR HM... LINDA :)

Len Gasun January 16, 2016 at 1:58 AM A spectacular cornish sonnet my dear friend, Sara! I love it so much and you did it very well too. Congratulations on your win! Thanks for sharing! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Paul Callus January 13, 2016 at 11:47 AM You usher in the new year with joy and peace, Sara. May you have a lovely and blessed year ahead! ~ Congratulations! ~ Regards // paul

Skat A January 12, 2016 at 11:33 PM Sara, nice to see your HM... Hugs ** SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 12, 2016 at 1:39 AM Joyful read Sara.. loved the serene title as well.. congrats on big win!

Viv Wigley January 12, 2016 at 12:02 AM Fizzes with hope and joy, Sara, well done! Viv x

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser January 8, 2016 at 3:36 AM Sara, blessings to you and your family.. =`) full of optimism and wonder!! Sara thank you for the e-card you sent to James which he shared tom me last time.. =`) smiles, Olive Eloisa =`)

Louis Spence January 6, 2016 at 3:45 PM Sara. Thank you for your kind assessment on my poem Players. I looked through your work and particularly like this bright offering. Well done. Louis

Dalia Shahein January 5, 2016 at 6:55 PM Full of positivity , a true beautiful and unique sonnet my dear , best of luck in the contest...hugs / / :) dalia

Nette Onclaud January 4, 2016 at 3:01 PM now, this endearing piece makes me happy, dear sara... i like!.. huggs and happy new year!

Andrea Dietrich January 3, 2016 at 5:58 PM love the mention of the fireworks as symbols of the joy and contentment, Sara. Good luck in the cornish sonnet contest. and thanks for all your support of my poems this past year.

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis January 3, 2016 at 5:52 PM Marvelous title with lines promising good things for the new year and beyond. Thanks for visiting... Sara Kendrick January 13, 2016 at 6:57 AM I am so glad that I chose that as my title..I do hope that this year holds good things for everyone..Sara

White Sage January 2, 2016 at 8:55 PM You wrote it right Sara, nice poem Sara Kendrick January 3, 2016 at 8:32 AM Ahh!!! Thank you..Sara