Peace in the sky

the large bird soars high over the loud, busy streets peace found in the sky Heidi Sands 8/22/24 (C)opyright

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/31/2024 8:29:00 AM

What a fun Haiku write. A story in 3 lines. Hooray!!! Enjoy your day/weekend..........

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/31/2024 5:54:00 PM

Thanks so much my friend. I appreciate your kind comments :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 8/25/2024 7:28:00 AM

Oh that we may find serenity at least above the cumulus. Lovely haiku.

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/25/2024 11:44:00 AM

Yes, may we find the serenity. Thank you :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 8/24/2024 5:23:00 AM

Heidi,, I love the sere images captured by tour haiku! Lovely to read this morning! Happy Saturday xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/24/2024 6:02:00 AM

Thank you very much Mike. I am happy to hear that. Happy Saturday :)

Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 8/23/2024 12:59:00 PM

Lovely lovely lovely haiku!

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/23/2024 1:02:00 PM

Thank you Abdullah ! :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 8/22/2024 11:25:00 PM

Something we all wish for Heidi. Hope you're keeping well, enjoy your weekend. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 8/23/2024 5:24:00 AM

True Tom. We do wish for this. The bird seemed to have it. I am doing ok. Still very challenging. I hope you have a nice day. Thank you :)