Peace

Amidst the chaos peace descended. 
It calmed the waves and quieted the storm. 
It wafted like a breeze, cleansing the air, 
and settled like a butterfly with gossamer wing. 

Just when it seemed that the world was ending 
it slipped quietly in.  Sitting at the back; 
listening but saying nothing.  Silent, 
waiting for the moment to 'attack'. 

It watched and waited as the fighting continued. 
Almost interrupting, but held in check. 
When the arm lifted the sword to strike 
the deciding blow, it whispered 'stop', 

and the weapon wavered in the warring hand 
before it fell and clattered to the floor. 
Peace spoke then: 'look what you've done 
with your hatred and cruelty. Do you think you won? 

Look at the destruction, the devastated souls, 
and the misery you have caused. I've been watching 
and waiting for you to come to your senses, but 
you never did.  Not content until the world 

creaked and cracked under the strain, 
until all that remained was hopelessness. 
Well, I'm here now and I order you to stop.' 
Amidst the chaos peace has descended. 

War and hate have ended.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Bickerstaffe Avatar
December 6, 2008 at 11:28 PM
A unique look at peace. '...the weapon wavered in the warring hand,' ...excellent alliteration! Marvelous phrasing and imagery. Best wishes, Keith
White Avatar
August 25, 2008 at 9:13 AM
Helen, that is certainly what will happen, peace will prevail very shortly forever and always, everything in Jehovah God's due time not ours, because he desires all to attain to repentance, so he gives us all a chance great write, take care D-nyce
George   Avatar
August 2, 2008 at 7:12 PM
Dear Helen, I pray this inspirational possitive poem comes to pass. Great writing. Love, lainie thank you for your kind comments on my poetry.
Jordan Avatar
July 29, 2008 at 3:27 PM
Well written poem Helen - I loved the message of peace - wouldn't be nice if everybody just got along and shared what they didn't need with those who have nothing - I mean there is plenty to go around but rather than give it away mankind chooses to throw it away - Enjoyed your poem - God Bless
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