Paying the Toll

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It greets me twice a day, morning and afternoon
Not pleasantly like a song from the musical, Brigadoon
No, not this structure that awaits me like a vigilant spy,
reminding me of the play's song, "There But For You Go I."

Each morning it slows me down as I make my way to work
I've come to regard it as a petulant nuisance and a jerk
I crawl along at a tedious pace, often hitting the brakes,
Red lights flashing as long lines form like slithering snakes

Its tempo in the afternoon moves slower than a larghetto
Never music to my ears when I decelerate to its concerto
The horns I hear are not from an orchestra, I blow one, too
But to its maestro I must pay or he'll never allow me through

I've come to know the menace well and call it a buffoon
because of its rudeness to drivers who have to sing his tune
Then came the day I heard the toll would no longer be taken
and the rascally little cubicle was soon to be forsaken

No longer am I forced to dawdle as I drive along the road
Though I think its ghost remains, traffic has swiftly flowed
I sing along with the radio, in a pleasant voice I now croon
but never do I sing "There But For You Go I" from Brigadoon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 2/2/2018 8:39:00 AM
Well, I can relate to this one, Lin, we have so many toll gates over here, and wonder where all the money goes!!
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Date: 2/2/2018 8:47:00 AM
lol the money certainly doesn't seem to go to fixing the roads! Thanks, Jo.
Date: 1/28/2018 6:08:00 PM
What a pleasant rhyming poem! So well put together and easily imagined. I love to read poems like this aloud.
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Date: 2/1/2018 8:19:00 AM
Thanks, Carole. I like to read aloud, too.
Date: 1/28/2018 5:21:00 PM
It's not for free...nothing is really...Nicely done...All the best Lin
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Date: 2/1/2018 8:18:00 AM
Thanks, Art.
Date: 1/28/2018 2:10:00 PM
I'm so glad we don't have toll roads to slow us down it sure helps make the journey much smoother and there is no sort of conflict Lin:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/1/2018 8:18:00 AM
There was one here for years when a new bridge was built and at peak times traffic was backed up quite a ways. Thanks, Jan.
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