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PAY ATTENTION

I pay attention. I see the sadness in a young schoolgirl’s eyes When she has been cruelly ridiculed and ostracized. For what? She doesn’t look the same As others; too tall, too fat, too blonde. Does she have the wrong last name? I pay attention. I see the old woman setting alone on her sunny porch Accompanied by lush green plants silently watching her. Caressed by the purring of contented multicolored cats, Alone, but herself content to be out of the race. I see satisfaction and relief on her calm, but weathered face. I pay attention: I see the fast-paced hustle of the young entrepreneur, So excited, but anxious, rushing to be the first there, Where his efforts and sacrifice finally make the grade. He’s given his all to elevate his life and pave a new way. He is reaping sweet rewards his own hands have made. I pay attention: I see the patterns and the interconnected revelations As a host of humanity marches through my life. Leaving their own special nuances and inspiration, I reflect the collage of their unintended influences. I wonder what my own contribution will be. Will someone, someday, pay attention to me? Copyright Chula Schlesinger-Fleming © 10/10/2024

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Date: 12/31/2024 3:18:00 AM
Hi Chula, your poem is food for thought, now days it's social media people pay attention to. wishing you a happy new year God bless. xx
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Date: 11/29/2024 5:20:00 PM
Hello Chula, A question that has no answer. i guess one day you will find out. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/3/2024 11:22:00 AM
Hello Chula, i hope so to. thank you. Haaaave a blessed day Chula. Hugs. /Darlene/
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Chula Schlesinger-Fleming
Date: 12/1/2024 10:10:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene! Hope so! Thanks for stopping by. Be Blessed and well.
Date: 11/19/2024 11:13:00 AM
Heartfelt, resonant poem, Chula. Especially since the advent of the dominance of social media in people's lives, will anyone pay attention anymore? Great question! ~ Gershon
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Chula Schlesinger-Fleming
Date: 12/1/2024 10:09:00 AM
Thanks so much, Gershon! Totally agree, that was what was on my mind when I wrote it! Life is passing us by and our focus in on a tiny rectangle in our hand or the computer screen with no warm touch.
Date: 11/16/2024 11:51:00 AM
Chula there's a lady on here now in her eighties, her name is Panagiota Romios, when you have time read her poems, she thinks the same way as we do.
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Chula Schlesinger-Fleming
Date: 11/16/2024 4:17:00 PM
Thanks, John. I will definitely check her out!
Date: 11/16/2024 11:46:00 AM
Hi Chula, the way the world is going, I believe we will be the forgotten ones, I'm in my seventies now, and I've seen so much change, sadly not for the better. Xx
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Chula Schlesinger-Fleming
Date: 11/16/2024 4:19:00 PM
I"m 71, and totally understand. That's one reason I try to write more now, so my poems will outlive me. LOL

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