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Although I am not a victim of war myself, I am a survivor of something that allows me to recognize what I am writing about.

Some said they lost all hope; Some did, you saw it in their eyes: That little light That shines so bright Became dull and disappeared. Some became bitter, some wise, Some couldn't cope. That small white Flicker, once bright, Slowly went out. So often that is what I see In eyes, even on TV, and I recognise, For I was there. I was where I did despise What back then became of me. With everything taken away, Including your humanity, And nothing remains But empty shell, Sheer hell. And too tired for complaints. This terrible insanity Of war, how some people play With others as if simple pawns On a chess board. With hands high, To move at will. Freezing chill... I still have no reply, And have no vocal chords Left to speak up... When will it dawn On them we're human entities! Where oh where is my identity...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/20/2017 11:03:00 PM
Darren, you have outdone yourself, you have humanized the traumatic and made the reader contemplate, so well done!
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Darren White
Date: 1/20/2017 11:16:00 PM
Thank you Arthur, and that exactly is what I meant by writing the poem.
Date: 1/20/2017 8:08:00 PM
We still have such unfairness in the world, But I'm glad we still have good people to balance all the despicable ones. Rant when you feel like it, and keep moving on, because you're a fighter... <3 <3 <3
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Darren White
Date: 1/20/2017 11:24:00 PM
I am happy to have good people in my life. Thanks Claudia. <3
Date: 1/20/2017 10:00:00 AM
I can picture the big eyes looking out but all the feeling lost.
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Darren White
Date: 1/20/2017 10:05:00 AM
Exactly. It's what I see and recognize.
Date: 1/20/2017 9:26:00 AM
Sometimes it does feel this way, more to others I am sure, but we must go on, regardless of how the board is set. It is sad the state of affairs in some places, the fear, the pain and the sorrow. Deeply touching Darren.
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Darren White
Date: 1/20/2017 9:34:00 AM
It does, sometimes yes. There are times when this anger is triggered in me, but yes, it is temporarily nowadays, for which I am grateful. We move forward, cannot solve all the problems in the world singlehandedly. Thanks Chris.

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