Lin Lane Poet Triolet

Paulette - 2

Paulette went on a holiday
Visiting Italy and France
To mark her fortieth birthday
Paulette went on a holiday
Saw the Arc de Triomphe today
And adored Venice at first glance
Paulette went on a holiday
Visiting Italy and France


December 21, 2021
Paulette - 2 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Julia Ward

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Pashang Salehi December 23, 2021 at 11:58 PM Paulette must have had both of her shots plus the booster in order to enjoy her visit to Italy and France... LOL Pashang Salehi January 12, 2022 at 10:26 AM great... be well Lin Lane December 24, 2021 at 3:20 AM Yes, she follows the guidelines to protect herself and others. Thanks.

Victor Buhagiar December 23, 2021 at 8:30 AM Excellent. I've been to France and Italy several times. No more. Too old now. Lin Lane December 24, 2021 at 3:18 AM I’ve yet to cross the Atlantic. Merci, Victor.

Bill Baker December 21, 2021 at 5:54 PM Excellent Triolet, Lin. Very supportive details of Italy and Fance. Definately in the running for a win with this one! Merry Christmas, Bill Lin Lane December 24, 2021 at 3:17 AM We shall see about it making the list, but I’m grateful for your support, Bill.

Evelyn Judy Buehler December 21, 2021 at 12:06 PM I enjoyed this lovely work very much. Lin Lane December 24, 2021 at 3:15 AM Thank so much.

Connie Marcum Wong December 21, 2021 at 9:56 AM Both of these cities have breath taking beauty Lin. A lovely Triolet. Holiday blessings my friend. xxoo Lin Lane December 21, 2021 at 11:05 AM I remember you were a flight attendant...probably visited often. I hope to get to both of them someday. Have to feel safer flying with covid on such a long flight first. Thanks for the read, Connie.

L Milton Hankins December 21, 2021 at 9:12 AM Ah, Paulette has a marvelous holiday. Your triolet is so fine, Lin. It's one of my favorite poetry forms, as you probably know. Loved yours! Lin Lane December 21, 2021 at 11:04 AM I thought of two cities I've always wanted to visit, so I bought her a ticket and sent her on her way. lol Merci, Milt.

Christuraj Alex December 21, 2021 at 8:20 AM Beautiful Triolet. Best wishes. Lin Lane December 21, 2021 at 11:03 AM Thank you, Chris.

Tom Cunningham December 21, 2021 at 7:10 AM Went to Venice a few years ago, a magical place and I'm sure Paulette would agree. Good luck in the contest Lin. Tom Lin Lane December 21, 2021 at 11:03 AM I'm sure I would agree, too... one day. Thanks so much, Tom.

Chris Green December 21, 2021 at 6:43 AM Nicely done Lin. Sounds like a fantastic holiday to me. Best wishes in the contest. Lin Lane December 21, 2021 at 11:02 AM Hi Chris. It's a follow-up contest and my first poem placed, so I thought I'd treat Paulette to a holiday! lol Thanks.