Paulette - 2

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Paulette’s dream was peaked rapture without end So she rested thought, to make room for the divine Head and heart melded and to God’s will did bend Paulette’s dream was peaked rapture without end Her desire was fulfilled as bliss vibrations did ascend All this was enabled, the moment she chose to align Paulette’s dream was peaked rapture without end So she rested thought, to make room for the divine 11-January-2022 Paulette - 2 Poetry Contest Sponsor: Julia Ward

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Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 1/16/2022 9:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! :)Paulette

Karen Croft

Date: 1/16/2022 1:22:00 AM

congrats on your win!

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/16/2022 5:18:00 AM

Thanks Karen

Beata Agustin

Date: 1/15/2022 8:06:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Delightful and delighting from the start til the end. God bless you.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/15/2022 8:20:00 PM

Thank you, Beata!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/15/2022 9:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. "Paulette - 2 " is a creative story/write. What a fun picture. Have a blessed day/weekend with your win...............

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/15/2022 8:20:00 PM

Thank you, dear Paula! Your visit is always like a breath of fresh morning air

Curtis Johnson

Date: 1/15/2022 8:45:00 AM

Congrats on your top placement. There is so much power packed into these few lines. I was arrested and captured by words like 'rested', 'make room', and 'enabled'. Blessings.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/15/2022 8:18:00 PM

Thank you, Curtis! I was pleasantly surprised at the win