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Paulette - 2

Paulette went on a holiday Visiting Italy and France To mark her fortieth birthday Paulette went on a holiday Saw the Arc de Triomphe today And adored Venice at first glance Paulette went on a holiday Visiting Italy and France December 21, 2021 Paulette - 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Julia Ward

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 12/23/2021 11:58:00 PM

Paulette must have had both of her shots plus the booster in order to enjoy her visit to Italy and France... LOL

Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/12/2022 10:26:00 AM

great... be well

Lin Lane
Date: 12/24/2021 3:20:00 AM

Yes, she follows the guidelines to protect herself and others. Thanks.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/23/2021 8:30:00 AM

Excellent. I've been to France and Italy several times. No more. Too old now.

Lin Lane
Date: 12/24/2021 3:18:00 AM

I’ve yet to cross the Atlantic. Merci, Victor.

Bill Baker

Date: 12/21/2021 5:54:00 PM

Excellent Triolet, Lin. Very supportive details of Italy and Fance. Definately in the running for a win with this one! Merry Christmas, Bill

Lin Lane
Date: 12/24/2021 3:17:00 AM

We shall see about it making the list, but I’m grateful for your support, Bill.

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 12/21/2021 12:06:00 PM

I enjoyed this lovely work very much.

Lin Lane
Date: 12/24/2021 3:15:00 AM

Thank so much.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/21/2021 9:56:00 AM

Both of these cities have breath taking beauty Lin. A lovely Triolet. Holiday blessings my friend. xxoo

Lin Lane
Date: 12/21/2021 11:05:00 AM

I remember you were a flight attendant...probably visited often. I hope to get to both of them someday. Have to feel safer flying with covid on such a long flight first. Thanks for the read, Connie.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 12/21/2021 9:12:00 AM

Ah, Paulette has a marvelous holiday. Your triolet is so fine, Lin. It's one of my favorite poetry forms, as you probably know. Loved yours!

Lin Lane
Date: 12/21/2021 11:04:00 AM

I thought of two cities I've always wanted to visit, so I bought her a ticket and sent her on her way. lol Merci, Milt.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/21/2021 8:20:00 AM

Beautiful Triolet. Best wishes.

Lin Lane
Date: 12/21/2021 11:03:00 AM

Thank you, Chris.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/21/2021 7:10:00 AM

Went to Venice a few years ago, a magical place and I'm sure Paulette would agree. Good luck in the contest Lin. Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 12/21/2021 11:03:00 AM

I'm sure I would agree, too... one day. Thanks so much, Tom.

Chris Green

Date: 12/21/2021 6:43:00 AM

Nicely done Lin. Sounds like a fantastic holiday to me. Best wishes in the contest.

Lin Lane
Date: 12/21/2021 11:02:00 AM

Hi Chris. It's a follow-up contest and my first poem placed, so I thought I'd treat Paulette to a holiday! lol Thanks.