Paulette - 1

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Struggling with sorrow Time she had to borrow Her mind filled with pity Her position wasn’t pretty She had the name of Paulette God knows she couldn’t forget How he’d kissed away her pain Left her without cloud or rain Then someone new he’d met And she was left here to fret Paulette - 1 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Julia Ward November 10, 2021

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Constance La France

Date: 12/15/2021 9:56:00 AM

Gina, congratulations on your Second place win in Julia's contest, wonderful writing ~ love and serenity _Constance

Beata Agustin

Date: 12/15/2021 1:18:00 AM

Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 12/14/2021 10:45:00 PM

"kissed away her pain" - Great poetic phrase. Whole poem is very beautiful. Congratulations!

Eve Roper

Date: 12/14/2021 8:58:00 PM

Great rhyming verse, Regina, congratulations on your win. Happy Holidays my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/14/2021 3:57:00 PM

Way to go, REgina, in the Paulette contest. I can't believe I forgot to even post my poem I wrote for this.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 11/12/2021 9:00:00 PM

I feel Paulette’s pain, it’s plain to see. A superb write for the contest Gina… Belle