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Siren-red hair, it screams from port. Starboard aflame with twilight’s trance. Intense Paulette ~ the sea’s consort. Siren-red hair, it screams from port, nudging the captain and his court. Danger at dawn - high risk romance. Siren-red hair, it screams from port. Starboard aflame with twilight’s trance. 1/8/2021

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Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 1/16/2022 9:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win! Very passionate! :)Paulette

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/16/2022 12:23:00 PM

Thank you, Paulette! :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/15/2022 9:32:00 AM

Congratulations on your beautiful story/win. Love your, "Siren-red hair" and pretty picture. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away.................

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2022 2:04:00 PM

Thank you, Paula!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 1/15/2022 5:27:00 AM

Great triolet with "Siren-red hair" -Beautiful. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/15/2022 2:04:00 PM

Thank you!

Julia Ward

Date: 1/15/2022 2:07:00 AM

I like the drama, ensuring a high placement in my contest.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/11/2022 2:38:00 PM

Quite beautiful and with depth. Enjoyed.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/11/2022 3:20:00 PM

Thanks, M.L.!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 1/9/2022 4:29:00 AM

A really unique write on the theme, Kim, hope it wins:)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/9/2022 6:01:00 AM

Thanks so much, Jo!

P.S. Awtry

Date: 1/8/2022 12:59:00 PM

The idea, the flow, word choice, beautiful and the picture--perfect complement. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2022 1:21:00 PM

Thank you, dear friend!

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/8/2022 11:06:00 AM

This is really excellent writing, mysterious and enchanting. "Red sky at night, etc.." . I come from a long-line of fishermen who sailed the Mediterranean. Great-granddad went down with his schooner, in the early 1800's during a storm. Read your bio, from Buffalo New York. I lived in Syracuse for a winter, back in the 60's. Syracuse was -27 with 54 inches of snow on the ground. Buffalo had a 120 inches on the ground. Talk about cold. Brrrr!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2022 1:25:00 PM

Thanks so much for sharing, Joe! I love every bit of your comment! We moved to the Hudson Valley when I was two but visited our family in Buffalo all the time.

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed

Date: 1/8/2022 10:23:00 AM

Simply beautiful! Now i feel ashamed with mine! Although I'm new here, just wanted to join a contest! that's all. but reading this magnificent poesy Triolet, you made it so fairy-tale like, amazing feeling! hope it wins! Thanks - Marshall

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2022 1:26:00 PM

This community of Soupers helps one other to grow as poets. Welcome!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/8/2022 6:57:00 AM

Loved your poem. Doubt if I ever used this form. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2022 8:25:00 AM

Try it! Works of the refrain. ~ hugs

Lynn D.

Date: 1/8/2022 6:19:00 AM

Beautifully written! Sparks the imagination! Write more!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/8/2022 8:24:00 AM

Thank you, Lynn! :)