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Paulette-2

Siren-red hair, it screams from port.
Starboard aflame with twilight’s trance.
Intense Paulette ~ the sea’s consort.
Siren-red hair, it screams from port,
nudging the captain and his court.
Danger at dawn - high risk romance.
Siren-red hair, it screams from port.
Starboard aflame with twilight’s trance.

1/8/2021

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Paulette Calasibetta Date: 1/16/2022 9:31:00 AM Congratulations on your win! Very passionate! :)Paulette Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/16/2022 12:23:00 PM Thank you, Paulette! :)

Paula Goldsmith Date: 1/15/2022 9:32:00 AM Congratulations on your beautiful story/win. Love your, "Siren-red hair" and pretty picture. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away................. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/15/2022 2:04:00 PM Thank you, Paula!

Christuraj Alex Date: 1/15/2022 5:27:00 AM Great triolet with "Siren-red hair" -Beautiful. Congratulations! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/15/2022 2:04:00 PM Thank you!

Julia Ward Date: 1/15/2022 2:07:00 AM I like the drama, ensuring a high placement in my contest. Login to Reply

M. L. Kiser Date: 1/11/2022 2:38:00 PM Quite beautiful and with depth. Enjoyed. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/11/2022 3:20:00 PM Thanks, M.L.!

Joanna Daniel Date: 1/9/2022 4:29:00 AM A really unique write on the theme, Kim, hope it wins:) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/9/2022 6:01:00 AM Thanks so much, Jo!

P.S. Awtry Date: 1/8/2022 12:59:00 PM The idea, the flow, word choice, beautiful and the picture--perfect complement. :) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/8/2022 1:21:00 PM Thank you, dear friend!

Joe Dimino Date: 1/8/2022 11:06:00 AM This is really excellent writing, mysterious and enchanting. "Red sky at night, etc.." . I come from a long-line of fishermen who sailed the Mediterranean. Great-granddad went down with his schooner, in the early 1800's during a storm. Read your bio, from Buffalo New York. I lived in Syracuse for a winter, back in the 60's. Syracuse was -27 with 54 inches of snow on the ground. Buffalo had a 120 inches on the ground. Talk about cold. Brrrr! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/8/2022 1:25:00 PM Thanks so much for sharing, Joe! I love every bit of your comment! We moved to the Hudson Valley when I was two but visited our family in Buffalo all the time.

Marshall Iftekhar Ahmed Date: 1/8/2022 10:23:00 AM Simply beautiful! Now i feel ashamed with mine! Although I'm new here, just wanted to join a contest! that's all. but reading this magnificent poesy Triolet, you made it so fairy-tale like, amazing feeling! hope it wins! Thanks - Marshall Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/8/2022 1:26:00 PM This community of Soupers helps one other to grow as poets. Welcome!

Victor Buhagiar Date: 1/8/2022 6:57:00 AM Loved your poem. Doubt if I ever used this form. Hugs. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/8/2022 8:25:00 AM Try it! Works of the refrain. ~ hugs

Lynn D. Date: 1/8/2022 6:19:00 AM Beautifully written! Sparks the imagination! Write more! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/8/2022 8:24:00 AM Thank you, Lynn! :)