Notes About The Poem

July-19- 2026

Patterns Poetry Contest

Sponsor- Sara Kendrick

~Placed Sixth~


 

Patterns on a Tiger and Zebra

Look, with what amazing artistry, God has painted the tiger and the zebra. In zig zag alignment, in a neat pattern, Not complex as the design on the hood of a cobra. How different they are, yet how similar! No human hand can craft such an art work. Like streams, their lines glisten in wilderness. Strangely they are visible even in the dark. In flaming colors of black and white, On a zebra, the lines run in a neat stripe. No two lines are quite the same. Neither animal, a replica of the other type. Through different tracks, they roam. One reminds us of day and night. The other, of dusk and golden morn. Both wear coats of fur in stripes so bright. Their streaks, a lovely script God has penned These bands of white and black tend, To tell aloud that opposites can thrive, And beauty is born where contrasts blend.
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Guptar Avatar
July 25, 2026 at 12:07 AM
Congratulations Valsa on your win in his contest with a lovely poem comparing patterns on a tiger and a zebra. Very few would have thought of this for a poem on patterns. Wish you a pleasant weekend.
Kendrick Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 12:54 PM
I wanted to thank you personally for your participation in my contest. It was nice to see your work in the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations to you. Sara K.
George Avatar
July 24, 2026 at 11:41 PM
Thank you dear Sara for the placement given.
Andresen Avatar
July 23, 2026 at 10:57 AM
- Back with a congratulations, Valsa :) - hugs
Jones Avatar
July 22, 2026 at 8:02 PM
Congratulations sweet Valsa on your win!
One Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 12:55 PM
I enjoyed the sense of awe that runs through this poem. You take an everyday wonder of nature and use it to reflect on the artistry of creation. The closing stanza is especially meaningful "beauty is born where contrasts blend," which leaves the reader with a thoughtful message. Overall, it's a lovely celebration of the beauty found in both difference and harmony.
DiMino Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 9:14 AM
"And beauty is born where contrasts blend." -- Wow! Beautiful! Have you seen many cobras in the wild, up close? Desert rattlers I always give the right of way.
Poet Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 2:36 AM
Captivating poem that is skillfully constructed and has an outstanding pattern: an exceptionally engaging style. You have shown a great deal of originality in your approach to the pattern subject. It was a delightful read.
Buhagiar Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 2:02 AM
There is a contest on patterns. You did this very well. Two beautiful animals best stay apart though.
Hind Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 10:50 PM
very sagelike, it opened my mind up
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 2:23 PM
You chose such a creative way to go with the pattern theme. A very enjoyable read. So far I don't see anyone doing my own pattern type. I need to post it soon. But yikes. So many contests are closing soon! Anyway. I love how you showed both the similarities and differences in two incredible animals
Andresen Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 12:56 PM
- Beautifully described... they have unique patterns, Valsa :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 10:52 AM
What a wonderful write you have here. Love It... Great Ending...  "Good Luck"  I did, "Pattern  Of One's Life." Have a lovely day writing away............
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