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Patina Of Life

A stampede of horses captured their thunderous strides frozen a magnificent scene unfolds within a rich patina of bronze. Artisan expression brazen and bold molding a stunning scene of nature sparking the depths of imagination to be appreciated indefinitely. Run wild, you beautiful beasts over the endless prairies of time flaring nostrils, flowing manes away from that unseen threat hooves beating upon the ground a statuesque scene created reflected within that immortal patina of life. Written on 6/26/2018

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Date: 7/4/2019 12:26:00 AM
You sound like you sculpt Laura. Art and poetry, also an art, are simpatico! Your vivid imagery professes such emotions. Beautiful Laura! Congratulations on your deserving first place! : ) xxoo
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/4/2019 11:10:00 AM
Thank you so much, Connie! I’ve always wanted to do sculpture and someday I will! I actually play piano, and have done some sketching. Hugs! :)
Date: 10/6/2018 11:32:00 AM
Hi Laura, you bring to life the equine in this excellent piece of poetry. So vivid the imagery and such a wonderful flow. Your pen has run gold in this piece Laura. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 8/3/2018 1:08:00 PM
Thoughts of Chincoteague and Assateague Islands in Virginia came to mind when I read this delightful work.
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Date: 7/22/2018 1:49:00 AM
A lovely paean to the equine, Laura, flows so well. Viv x
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Date: 7/4/2018 4:06:00 PM
Sublime
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/4/2018 9:04:00 PM
Thank you, Hardik! :)
Date: 7/4/2018 10:19:00 AM
Laura This Brilliant----pure poetry
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/4/2018 11:23:00 AM
Thank you for the compliment, Jerry! So glad you liked this :)
Date: 7/3/2018 2:54:00 PM
I do like that
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Laura Leiser
Date: 7/4/2018 11:23:00 AM
Thank you, Al!
Date: 6/27/2018 8:46:00 AM
Nice ending... Love he language in this poem and his flows so well from the tongue...
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/27/2018 3:38:00 PM
Thank you, Silent! I’m glad you liked this :)
Date: 6/27/2018 12:02:00 AM
Such a vivid, lovely write.. Laura!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 6/27/2018 12:10:00 AM
Thank you, Lyric! It’s great to see you back again! :)