Patiently Waiting For the Right Answer

A friend to her, for decades from the innocence of children to the adventures of teenagers and even the stupidity of best friends all well shared and enjoyed to a point the gods ask why the wait and beg for the next level. He sees all the possibilities to make her the care-taker of his heart. Thinking he's the only one with eyes open he made his confession attached with an honest recommendation to his amazement she looked at him and said "you are so nice, but like a brother to me'. Switching to the next damsel who's no where near cold but soft, tender, meek and charming. He allows her control the pace and lets her gentleness maintain the tempo. Feeds her with poems and makes her drunk with happiness with hopes going higher, reaching the moon she looked at him and said "sorry! I am not yet ready". He jumped into the next wagon having an available space for a beauty and meets a potential 'second half' pretty, quiet and an introvert. Worships her right from day one letting lose the net of affection, half in magnitude of his efforts will strike the tenderness of a millepede but it got her scared as she looked at him and said "I just had a heart break; I'm so sorry" Watering a fresh new flower growing in a familiar garden just close by, makes him grow in creativity as he engage in constant words exchange and creating wonderful serenity around her. Huge investments and time well spent coupled with passionate research in equipping his machinery of jokes and laughter sums up his passion and carefulness in his latest trial which seems worthy of the medal. Constant updates on his outlook and becoming the number one specimen for fashion were not enough as she looked at him and said "You still have no swag" So many disappointments made him stronger, wiser and smarter not even a forest of wild beast will make him turn his back to the beauty and escapades of life. The moment he tried to pause, the period he wanted to take a nap; the Queen bee passed by. A simple hi and a conversation led to series of memorable meetings, having in mind, the worst is a "no" and her welcoming countenance, a proof to nothing yet, he asked with no expectation in mind then she looked at him and said "Yes! Sweet heart. I want to be your girl"
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Poshiwa Avatar
March 17, 2014 at 4:59 AM
Oh dear Fumon, you are brilliant.
Dino Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 10:08 AM
Nice description. Indeed a wonderful piece.
Makama Avatar
February 23, 2014 at 12:07 PM
Thank you Edwin Kamuye
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 10:47 AM
AH! If at first you don't succeed.
Makama Avatar
February 14, 2014 at 12:19 PM
thanks Vince
Horsman Avatar
January 30, 2014 at 4:41 PM
truly wonderful poetry, love the message woven within this excellent piece....
Makama Avatar
January 30, 2014 at 5:06 PM
Thanks a lot harry
Guzzi Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 8:49 AM
Wonderful! I was right there with you. You know you can write Prose poetry in paragraphs [It can be done like this as well ;)] Sorry for not coming sooner [read my blog] I'm totally busy in the blog [I feel like the plate spinner at the circus!] Would you like to come play? Light & Love
Makama Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 9:09 AM
Thanks Debbie, I will definitely check out on your blogs...
Goff Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 7:40 AM
Funom...am pausing to catch myself here...being one who admires the xx chromosome, the structure of your prose is perfect! Maybe, I too closely identified with your story...but that's a good thing! Talking in circles here...guy gets the girl, (or other way around?) many worker bees are born...good work Funom! jimbo
Makama Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 9:08 AM
Wow! So expressive. Thanks James... Most of us went through this stage in life.
Kayode Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 4:11 AM
I am proud of you Funom , this is beyond words. Brilliant. Kayod5.
Makama Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 9:07 AM
Thanks a lot Kayode.... I am indeed grateful
Onclaud Avatar
January 25, 2014 at 5:42 PM
reaky cool; the woman knows how to choose the right guy.... amazing write; you really dived into the matter, fonum.. huggs
Makama Avatar
January 26, 2014 at 3:28 AM
Thanks nette.... You are so right..
Situation Avatar
January 25, 2014 at 3:20 AM
Length turns me off but you have the hand that makes that meaningless. Good job.
Makama Avatar
January 25, 2014 at 3:32 AM
thanks The situation, its been my pleasure
Situation Avatar
January 25, 2014 at 3:17 AM
You sure know alot about me.
Makama Avatar
January 25, 2014 at 3:32 AM
Haaaaaahaaaahaa! Really? Its nice to know. Thanks for your comment
Kendrick Avatar
January 24, 2014 at 5:13 PM
Ahhh!!! Enjoyed reading your young person's adventures in love..I am glad that I stopped by this one..Thanks for the visit to my page...Sara
Makama Avatar
January 25, 2014 at 3:31 AM
Thanks Sara, you've always been a friend
A  Avatar
January 24, 2014 at 4:24 PM
Hi Funom, it is very nice seeing you around me poems again. I love how you present the poem. Very powerful. I hope you stop by again. love~ SKAT
Makama Avatar
January 25, 2014 at 3:31 AM
Yeah I always will do stop by. Thanks for your comment
Gorelick Avatar
January 24, 2014 at 4:15 PM
Nicely done..it kept me interested to the end..hopeing for a good outcome at last. BG
Makama Avatar
January 25, 2014 at 3:30 AM
yeah Barbara, thanks
Andresen Avatar
January 24, 2014 at 3:39 PM
- A poem like a enjoyable story from real life .... very well written .... especially when it ends so sweet :))) - Lovely written, Funom !!! - thanks for your nice visit to my poem - Have a enjoyable weekend, enjoy. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Makama Avatar
January 25, 2014 at 3:30 AM
Thanks a lot Anne Lise
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