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Patiently Waiting For the Right Answer

A friend to her, for decades from the innocence of children to the adventures of teenagers and even the stupidity of best friends all well shared and enjoyed to a point the gods ask why the wait and beg for the next level. He sees all the possibilities to make her the care-taker of his heart. Thinking he's the only one with eyes open he made his confession attached with an honest recommendation to his amazement she looked at him and said "you are so nice, but like a brother to me'. Switching to the next damsel who's no where near cold but soft, tender, meek and charming. He allows her control the pace and lets her gentleness maintain the tempo. Feeds her with poems and makes her drunk with happiness with hopes going higher, reaching the moon she looked at him and said "sorry! I am not yet ready". He jumped into the next wagon having an available space for a beauty and meets a potential 'second half' pretty, quiet and an introvert. Worships her right from day one letting lose the net of affection, half in magnitude of his efforts will strike the tenderness of a millepede but it got her scared as she looked at him and said "I just had a heart break; I'm so sorry" Watering a fresh new flower growing in a familiar garden just close by, makes him grow in creativity as he engage in constant words exchange and creating wonderful serenity around her. Huge investments and time well spent coupled with passionate research in equipping his machinery of jokes and laughter sums up his passion and carefulness in his latest trial which seems worthy of the medal. Constant updates on his outlook and becoming the number one specimen for fashion were not enough as she looked at him and said "You still have no swag" So many disappointments made him stronger, wiser and smarter not even a forest of wild beast will make him turn his back to the beauty and escapades of life. The moment he tried to pause, the period he wanted to take a nap; the Queen bee passed by. A simple hi and a conversation led to series of memorable meetings, having in mind, the worst is a "no" and her welcoming countenance, a proof to nothing yet, he asked with no expectation in mind then she looked at him and said "Yes! Sweet heart. I want to be your girl"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/17/2014 4:59:00 AM
Oh dear Fumon, you are brilliant.
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Date: 2/23/2014 10:08:00 AM
Nice description. Indeed a wonderful piece.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/23/2014 12:07:00 PM
Thank you Edwin Kamuye
Date: 2/14/2014 10:47:00 AM
AH! If at first you don't succeed.
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Funom Makama
Date: 2/14/2014 12:19:00 PM
thanks Vince
Date: 1/30/2014 4:41:00 PM
truly wonderful poetry, love the message woven within this excellent piece....
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/30/2014 5:06:00 PM
Thanks a lot harry
Date: 1/26/2014 8:49:00 AM
Wonderful! I was right there with you. You know you can write Prose poetry in paragraphs [It can be done like this as well ;)] Sorry for not coming sooner [read my blog] I'm totally busy in the blog [I feel like the plate spinner at the circus!] Would you like to come play? Light & Love
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/26/2014 9:09:00 AM
Thanks Debbie, I will definitely check out on your blogs...
Date: 1/26/2014 7:40:00 AM
Funom...am pausing to catch myself here...being one who admires the xx chromosome, the structure of your prose is perfect! Maybe, I too closely identified with your story...but that's a good thing! Talking in circles here...guy gets the girl, (or other way around?) many worker bees are born...good work Funom! jimbo
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/26/2014 9:08:00 AM
Wow! So expressive. Thanks James... Most of us went through this stage in life.
Date: 1/26/2014 4:11:00 AM
I am proud of you Funom , this is beyond words. Brilliant. Kayod5.
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/26/2014 9:07:00 AM
Thanks a lot Kayode.... I am indeed grateful
Date: 1/25/2014 5:42:00 PM
reaky cool; the woman knows how to choose the right guy.... amazing write; you really dived into the matter, fonum.. huggs
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/26/2014 3:28:00 AM
Thanks nette.... You are so right..
Date: 1/25/2014 3:20:00 AM
Length turns me off but you have the hand that makes that meaningless. Good job.
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2014 3:32:00 AM
thanks The situation, its been my pleasure
Date: 1/25/2014 3:17:00 AM
You sure know alot about me.
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2014 3:32:00 AM
Haaaaaahaaaahaa! Really? Its nice to know. Thanks for your comment
Date: 1/24/2014 5:13:00 PM
Ahhh!!! Enjoyed reading your young person's adventures in love..I am glad that I stopped by this one..Thanks for the visit to my page...Sara
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2014 3:31:00 AM
Thanks Sara, you've always been a friend
Date: 1/24/2014 4:24:00 PM
Hi Funom, it is very nice seeing you around me poems again. I love how you present the poem. Very powerful. I hope you stop by again. love~ SKAT
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2014 3:31:00 AM
Yeah I always will do stop by. Thanks for your comment
Date: 1/24/2014 4:15:00 PM
Nicely done..it kept me interested to the end..hopeing for a good outcome at last. BG
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2014 3:30:00 AM
yeah Barbara, thanks
Date: 1/24/2014 3:39:00 PM
- A poem like a enjoyable story from real life .... very well written .... especially when it ends so sweet :))) - Lovely written, Funom !!! - thanks for your nice visit to my poem - Have a enjoyable weekend, enjoy. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Funom Makama
Date: 1/25/2014 3:30:00 AM
Thanks a lot Anne Lise

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