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Patience

Patience breezeless summer day - motionless on lily pad frog waits for victim

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 2/26/2015 12:40:00 PM

Oh a real haiku..a model. Love Pandita.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 2/26/2015 3:10:00 PM

Thank you so very much, dear Rajat, for always complimenting my work! My best wishes to you! Pandita.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/20/2014 12:51:00 PM

I had to come and see , except I think yours is better :) eve

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/20/2014 2:16:00 PM

Eve, thank you so much for this beautiful compliment - and I have to admit that on reading yours, I thought yours was the better piece! Well, it just goes to show that you and I know good poetry when we see it:-)!! Pandita

Kika Ayala

Date: 7/9/2014 1:04:00 AM

I can just visualize that frog patiently waiting for its next meal:-) Well done! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/9/2014 1:09:00 AM

You made my day, Kika, with your comments and compliments. Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2014 12:42:00 PM

I searched and searched and finally I found this poem I had not seen of yours. ME LIKES!!!!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/15/2014 1:17:00 PM

Andrea, thank you so much! Your compliments mean a lot to me!

Debbie Duncan

Date: 6/14/2014 3:44:00 AM

very nicely done, I wrote one about a pond, called The Ride. thank you for liking my Chocolate Covered Cherries. ((( happy summer )))

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/14/2014 2:52:00 PM

Hi Debbie, thank you, my friend for your sweet compliments. As usual, I appreciate your visits. Have a great weekend!

John Michaels

Date: 6/5/2014 7:29:00 AM

Lovely description! We tend to think of frogs, toads and other amphibians as slow and plodding, but wait 'til they get some food in front of them (hang on, that sounds a bit like me!!)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/5/2014 8:32:00 AM

That's right, my friend - they know about all about strategy :) LOL

Jim Tidd

Date: 6/2/2014 2:54:00 PM

Solo flight cut short above stilled mirror pond by patient tongue.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/2/2014 4:22:00 PM

That's great - I can just see that frog whipping out its practiced tongue at a tasty morsel!

Heather Secrest

Date: 5/13/2014 6:47:00 AM

A pinnacle of patience. This poem paints a pretty picture! Nothing is more patient than a hungry frog.Great write!! ~Heather

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/13/2014 6:49:00 AM

Heather, thank you again for the encouragement!