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Patience

Patience

breezeless summer day -
motionless on lily pad
frog waits for victim

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Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

February 26, 2015 at 12:40 PM

Oh a real haiku..a model. Love Pandita.

Pandita Sietesantos

February 26, 2015 at 3:10 PM

Thank you so very much, dear Rajat, for always complimenting my work! My best wishes to you! Pandita.

Eve Roper

October 20, 2014 at 12:51 PM

I had to come and see , except I think yours is better :) eve

Pandita Sietesantos

October 20, 2014 at 2:16 PM

Eve, thank you so much for this beautiful compliment - and I have to admit that on reading yours, I thought yours was the better piece! Well, it just goes to show that you and I know good poetry when we see it:-)!! Pandita

Kika Ayala

July 9, 2014 at 1:04 AM

I can just visualize that frog patiently waiting for its next meal:-) Well done! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos

July 9, 2014 at 1:09 AM

You made my day, Kika, with your comments and compliments. Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

June 15, 2014 at 12:42 PM

I searched and searched and finally I found this poem I had not seen of yours. ME LIKES!!!!

Pandita Sietesantos

June 15, 2014 at 1:17 PM

Andrea, thank you so much! Your compliments mean a lot to me!

Debbie Duncan

June 14, 2014 at 3:44 AM

very nicely done, I wrote one about a pond, called The Ride. thank you for liking my Chocolate Covered Cherries. ((( happy summer )))

Pandita Sietesantos

June 14, 2014 at 2:52 PM

Hi Debbie, thank you, my friend for your sweet compliments. As usual, I appreciate your visits. Have a great weekend!

John Michaels

June 5, 2014 at 7:29 AM

Lovely description! We tend to think of frogs, toads and other amphibians as slow and plodding, but wait 'til they get some food in front of them (hang on, that sounds a bit like me!!)

Pandita Sietesantos

June 5, 2014 at 8:32 AM

That's right, my friend - they know about all about strategy :) LOL