Notes About The Poem

Original title: To Want to Look Away

Pathos

(this is a sonnet kyrielle, which uses line 1 and 4
of the first stanza in a final couplet)

To want to look away. . . And yet to look!
To read with dread the ending of a book.
A paradox it is; a mystery.
How sweet the pathos of a tragedy!

Fair Juliet awakes and knows true woe;
She cannot live without her Romeo.
Not every plot can finish happily.
How sweet the pathos of a tragedy.

To feel another’s pain, we learn control.
Catharsis helps keep evil from the soul!
We should not need to always laugh with glee.
How sweet the pathos of a tragedy.

To want to look away. . . And yet to look!
How sweet the pathos of a tragedy.

10/1/2010
Submitted Sept. 24, 2021 
For the '''P'' Contest, New or Old' Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kauffman Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 12:20 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrea. Wonderful setting of "pathos" for your poem centered around the tragedy of Romeo and Juliet. A great tale of "if only.."
La France Avatar
October 5, 2021 at 8:38 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my "P" contest with this wonderfully penned poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2021 at 1:19 PM
love the impact of the repeated line Andrea, Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Horne Avatar
March 29, 2012 at 12:01 PM
lovely piece, my friend - glad I found this one!
Kendrick Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 1:25 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 3:47 PM
Congrats Andrea on your big win in Dr. Ram's contest with this amazing entry so expressive and quite impressive to read..luv.. enjoy your grand win tonight with luv my friend...
Freeman Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 3:20 PM
Congratulations Andrea, on your well deserved win. Agape, Moses
Devonshire Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 2:42 PM
Great poem, Andrea! We both talked about the catharsis tragedy provides. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 12:07 PM
Congrats on your win in contest ...........Luv/Best wishes always......Hitendra Mehta
Brown Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 9:32 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Cwiak Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 9:12 AM
Wonderful words, Andrea. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
Johnson Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 8:48 AM
Great writing Andrea and congratulations on 3rd among these great winners. Love, Joyce
Beck Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 8:31 AM
very nice sonnet...well deserved win ...congratulations
Mehta Avatar
October 26, 2010 at 8:12 AM
Very perfect write on the theme of the contest, Andrea, Congratulations on this well deserved win,
R Avatar
October 10, 2010 at 9:48 AM
This is really great, Andrea. Just loved your repeated line and your angle of approach. Best wishes in the contest! Emilia aka LL:))
Babcock Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 12:28 PM
Very well penned Andrea. Phyl
Coulstock Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 7:28 AM
Hi Andrea.I thought this was cleverly done.Also first we need to experience the bitter so we can enjoy the sweet.Good luck with this entry.Luv June.
Knop Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 8:01 AM
Andrea, I really enjoyed this Kyrielle, nicely penned! And thank you for your kind comments! have a great week and best of luck in Dr. Ram's contest!...All the best!...Gert:)
Eggins Avatar
October 3, 2010 at 4:17 AM
Wonderful Kyrielle Andrea and good luck in Dr Mehta's comp ... thanks for remembering me lol I been here on and off when my treatment allows I've been sick for the whole time ive been here ...smile thanks for the kind comment on my poem love and hugs Jayne
Haick Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 6:11 PM
A fantastic Kyrielle that will certainly do well in Dr. Ram's Contest, Andrea...Totally enjoyable! Love, Audrey
Maverick Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 1:08 PM
very good skillfully put
Tideswell Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 12:56 PM
Amazing poetry Andrea, absolutely loved your repeated line. You sold tragedy over comedy to me with your amazing kyrielle ~ Sharon :)
Murphy Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 12:51 PM
wonderful entry in the contest wishing you the best of luck thanks for all your comments and support hope you are having a great weekend faleshia
Anish Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 11:07 AM
Tragedy has it's place as you say so well in this poem. Fine work1 Love Matthew Anish
Neels Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 9:23 AM
Andrea a great entry for Dr. Ram's contest and a sure choice for a fovorite of mine. Hope your weekend is going great, love Wilma
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