Notes About The Poem

Original title: To Want to Look Away

Pathos

(this is a sonnet kyrielle, which uses line 1 and 4
of the first stanza in a final couplet)

To want to look away. . . And yet to look!
To read with dread the ending of a book.
A paradox it is; a mystery.
How sweet the pathos of a tragedy!

Fair Juliet awakes and knows true woe;
She cannot live without her Romeo.
Not every plot can finish happily.
How sweet the pathos of a tragedy.

To feel another’s pain, we learn control.
Catharsis helps keep evil from the soul!
We should not need to always laugh with glee.
How sweet the pathos of a tragedy.

To want to look away. . . And yet to look!
How sweet the pathos of a tragedy.

10/1/2010
Submitted Sept. 24, 2021 
For the '''P'' Contest, New or Old' Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 10/5/2021 12:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Andrea. Wonderful setting of "pathos" for your poem centered around the tragedy of Romeo and Juliet. A great tale of "if only.."
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Date: 10/5/2021 8:38:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my "P" contest with this wonderfully penned poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance
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Date: 9/27/2021 1:19:00 PM
love the impact of the repeated line Andrea, Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/29/2012 12:01:00 PM
lovely piece, my friend - glad I found this one!
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Date: 10/30/2010 1:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 10/26/2010 3:47:00 PM
Congrats Andrea on your big win in Dr. Ram's contest with this amazing entry so expressive and quite impressive to read..luv.. enjoy your grand win tonight with luv my friend...
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Date: 10/26/2010 3:20:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea, on your well deserved win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/26/2010 2:42:00 PM
Great poem, Andrea! We both talked about the catharsis tragedy provides. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/26/2010 12:07:00 PM
Congrats on your win in contest ...........Luv/Best wishes always......Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 10/26/2010 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/26/2010 9:12:00 AM
Wonderful words, Andrea. Congrats on your win in the contest. Dan C
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Date: 10/26/2010 8:48:00 AM
Great writing Andrea and congratulations on 3rd among these great winners. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/26/2010 8:31:00 AM
very nice sonnet...well deserved win ...congratulations
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Date: 10/26/2010 8:12:00 AM
Very perfect write on the theme of the contest, Andrea, Congratulations on this well deserved win,
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Date: 10/10/2010 9:48:00 AM
This is really great, Andrea. Just loved your repeated line and your angle of approach. Best wishes in the contest! Emilia aka LL:))
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:28:00 PM
Very well penned Andrea. Phyl
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Date: 10/5/2010 7:28:00 AM
Hi Andrea.I thought this was cleverly done.Also first we need to experience the bitter so we can enjoy the sweet.Good luck with this entry.Luv June.
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Date: 10/3/2010 8:01:00 AM
Andrea, I really enjoyed this Kyrielle, nicely penned! And thank you for your kind comments! have a great week and best of luck in Dr. Ram's contest!...All the best!...Gert:)
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Date: 10/3/2010 4:17:00 AM
Wonderful Kyrielle Andrea and good luck in Dr Mehta's comp ... thanks for remembering me lol I been here on and off when my treatment allows I've been sick for the whole time ive been here ...smile thanks for the kind comment on my poem love and hugs Jayne
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Date: 10/2/2010 6:11:00 PM
A fantastic Kyrielle that will certainly do well in Dr. Ram's Contest, Andrea...Totally enjoyable! Love, Audrey
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Date: 10/2/2010 1:08:00 PM
very good skillfully put
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Date: 10/2/2010 12:56:00 PM
Amazing poetry Andrea, absolutely loved your repeated line. You sold tragedy over comedy to me with your amazing kyrielle ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 10/2/2010 12:51:00 PM
wonderful entry in the contest wishing you the best of luck thanks for all your comments and support hope you are having a great weekend faleshia
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Date: 10/2/2010 11:07:00 AM
Tragedy has it's place as you say so well in this poem. Fine work1 Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/2/2010 9:23:00 AM
Andrea a great entry for Dr. Ram's contest and a sure choice for a fovorite of mine. Hope your weekend is going great, love Wilma
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