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How would you feel now? It's brutal to leave. It's challenging to view tears bestow to the grieve. Cogency has peculiarly drowned my life. Peace and harmony are solved by vying and strife. O, Love's Pathos! You sparkle akin to a jewel. In the realm of angels, all spirits dwell. A breeze blew over the garden of destiny. O, Love's Pathos! There is yet any dainty. I was the person who owned your inward mood. I was the person who adjusted your cooed. I had no goal of resisting your insight. Before meeting me, life would be a plight. Allow sadness to induce his happiness. Until sadness no longer finds jolliness.
2nd Place Contest Winner Written: September 25, 2021 ''P'' Contest, New or Old Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 10/5/2021 8:33:00 AM
Lasaad, congratulations on your win in my "P" contest with this poem, well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 10/5/2021 9:00:00 AM
Thank you so much, Constance, appreciate your reading and placing my poem. You're doing a wonderful job here on PS. Peace and Love Dearest Constance.
Date: 9/27/2021 12:58:00 PM
beautifully penned Lasaad, Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/25/2021 12:36:00 PM
Poignant words, Lasaad. I always must pause to think upon reading your fine poems.
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Date: 9/25/2021 11:33:00 AM
Your vocabulary is amazing Lasaad, you never fail to impress me, another gem from your pen. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
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Date: 9/25/2021 11:52:00 AM
Thank you so much, Tom, you're really kind, and I appreciate your kindness and uplifting words. I hope your weekend is going well as well.
Date: 9/25/2021 11:18:00 AM
Lasaad, your poem is loaded with marvelous images. Every line was thought-provoking. Best wishes for the contest.
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Date: 9/25/2021 11:54:00 AM
Thank you so much, Milt. I appreciate your great evaluation and encouraging feedback. I hope you are having a great weekend

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