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Pathetic Day

My morning starts with leaves from a tree falling on my bed, through my open bedroom window - I feel as though I could use a chainsaw now! My afternoon commences with sharp noises from spoons and butter knives falling on the shelves - my fingers tremble with rage as I search for contacts for animal control, to take my cat away from my kitchen! My dinner hour begins a leak on the roof of my dining room- I wonder whether God is punishing me for being grumpy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/10/2015 1:02:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning poem Teddy! Great work!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/10/2015 10:23:00 AM
Thanks Dr. Upma! ^_^
Date: 8/8/2015 9:57:00 PM
nice win... sk
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/9/2015 7:21:00 AM
Thanks sk! *^_^* <3
Date: 8/5/2015 8:53:00 PM
Hi Teddy...sorry, sounds like a really bad day...nice release though (:heers, Tbang
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/9/2015 7:20:00 AM
Hahahaha. At least I have a good Sunday. Thank you for your applause Thabang! ;-)

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