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B:L:O:O:D:B:A:T:H God’s wrath ~ Footpath ~ ~ Glide path ~ Demon wing dipped bloodbath. God’s wrath seethes. Gentle souls find footpath. Glide path breathes. Kim Rodrigues © 2017 Glide path – the final path followed by an aircraft as it is landing, thus our souls breathe as they alight in heaven.

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Date: 1/21/2018 8:06:00 AM
Very nice tyburn, Kim, never tried this form myself, you've done well:) looks challenging:)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/21/2018 5:59:00 PM
Thank you, Jo! :)
Date: 3/21/2017 3:44:00 AM
Very good and creative poem, Kim. This form is a technical - thought challenge. You appear to have mastered it well. Strong belief in your message. A 7 on simply tackling this tough poem form. Love and hugs to you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/21/2017 5:03:00 AM
Thanks so much, Freddie! :)
Date: 3/14/2017 7:01:00 PM
Love this form. Great write. Wonderful message. Amazing read. Thank you! Lots Of Love armand
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2017 8:08:00 PM
So appreciate your support, Armand! :)
Date: 3/14/2017 7:47:00 AM
Excellent Tyburn Kim, you make this difficult form look so easy, enjoyed very much, Roy. :))
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2017 7:48:00 AM
Thank you kindly, Roy! :)
Date: 3/14/2017 7:14:00 AM
Well, you learn something new every day! And I've never seen a tyburn before either! Great penmanship, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/14/2017 7:15:00 AM
Thank you WW!! I'm loving this brevity form!

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