Kim Rodrigues Poet Tyburn

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Path of Souls

B:L:O:O:D:B:A:T:H
                                 God’s wrath

~ Footpath ~
                     ~ Glide path ~

Demon wing dipped bloodbath. God’s wrath seethes.

Gentle souls find footpath. Glide path breathes.


Kim Rodrigues © 2017

Glide path – the final path followed by an aircraft as it is landing,
thus our souls breathe as they alight in heaven.

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Joanna Daniel January 21, 2018 at 8:06 AM Very nice tyburn, Kim, never tried this form myself, you've done well:) looks challenging:) Kim Rodrigues January 21, 2018 at 5:59 PM Thank you, Jo! :)

Freddie Robinson Jr. March 21, 2017 at 3:44 AM Very good and creative poem, Kim. This form is a technical - thought challenge. You appear to have mastered it well. Strong belief in your message. A 7 on simply tackling this tough poem form. Love and hugs to you. Kim Rodrigues March 21, 2017 at 5:03 AM Thanks so much, Freddie! :)

Maurice Yvonne March 14, 2017 at 7:01 PM Love this form. Great write. Wonderful message. Amazing read. Thank you! Lots Of Love armand Kim Rodrigues March 14, 2017 at 8:08 PM So appreciate your support, Armand! :)

Roy Pett March 14, 2017 at 7:47 AM Excellent Tyburn Kim, you make this difficult form look so easy, enjoyed very much, Roy. :)) Kim Rodrigues March 14, 2017 at 7:48 AM Thank you kindly, Roy! :)

White Wolf March 14, 2017 at 7:14 AM Well, you learn something new every day! And I've never seen a tyburn before either! Great penmanship, Kim. Kim Rodrigues March 14, 2017 at 7:15 AM Thank you WW!! I'm loving this brevity form!