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somewhere, along an intersection of a mystical dance, I have climbed, levitated and roamed into a pathway of seasonless space, where my fluid, heightened breath circles along veils of astral light sun eclipsing moon: dark-toned, half-streaked... one flick of a star nestled on my blown hair while another winked softly combing a fiery sky, somewhere: a tunnel shapeless and lucent enters inside the skin, refilling the airiness of being flown into a time reborn: ethereal, radiant , fed by something unbidden in my life... I was outside of my body as if some god poured angel tincture on my head… there and then, the noisiness of a kinetic earth-world suddenly stopped while a halo of tranquillity releases all the pride ( ego) dissolving like evening’s ash, somewhere * 7/4/2017 John Lawless' And Then It Stopped Contest
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Breedt Avatar
September 20, 2017 at 12:52 PM
I knew there were stars in your hair the moment I saw you. Ha ha. Beautiful pen. Congratulations you fabulous poet you
Robinson Jr. Avatar
July 19, 2017 at 3:58 PM
Awesome poem, Nette. I believe you were at the Nth Dimension emerging from the sea of bottomless joy, experiencing mild spiritual decompression ... and the negative bends bubbles floated off somewhere ... somewhere, who cares. This poem took my consciousness away on a stream of poetic serenity. Mighty fine poem. Love and smiles.
Downing  Avatar
July 18, 2017 at 2:33 PM
Breathtaking... congrats on your win Miss nette, such an outstanding piece!
Kiser Avatar
July 9, 2017 at 8:28 PM
Hot garlic butter flowing across warm bread sticks...well penned.
Turner Avatar
July 9, 2017 at 6:32 AM
Back to say congratulations, Nette:)
Allison Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 10:14 PM
Many congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 10:08 PM
Wow above and beyond Nette! I see and agree with your amazing poem filling the First place spot. Congratulations! : )
Sands Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 9:09 AM
Congratulations Nette :)
Canerdy Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 7:54 AM
Wow! Congratulations on your top win, Nette!
Lawless Avatar
July 8, 2017 at 7:48 AM
OK, Nette, just one question .... who is your travel agent??? Loved this invitation to a place seemingly so far away where everything stops....thanks for entering the contest
Daniel Avatar
July 5, 2017 at 10:31 PM
A deep transcendental poem, Nette:)
Em Avatar
July 5, 2017 at 5:32 AM
What can I say? You are a deep soul and a talented poet!
Gonza Avatar
July 5, 2017 at 5:22 AM
This is enlightening. Your vision and expressive phrases of oneness with the universe refresh me!
Andresen Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 2:06 PM
- A heavenly experience ... beautifully described, Nette :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Turner Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 12:31 PM
Well, I guess there goes my chance of placing:) Another beautiful poem from your river of abundance, nette:)
Wolf Avatar
July 4, 2017 at 10:29 AM
I think you have this one in the bag with this write, Nette! Great stuff! Best of luck
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