Path of Meditation Premiere Contest Winner

somewhere, along an intersection of a mystical dance, I have climbed, levitated and roamed into a pathway of seasonless space, where my fluid, heightened breath circles along veils of astral light sun eclipsing moon: dark-toned, half-streaked... one flick of a star nestled on my blown hair while another winked softly combing a fiery sky, somewhere: a tunnel shapeless and lucent enters inside the skin, refilling the airiness of being flown into a time reborn: ethereal, radiant , fed by something unbidden in my life... I was outside of my body as if some god poured angel tincture on my head… there and then, the noisiness of a kinetic earth-world suddenly stopped while a halo of tranquillity releases all the pride ( ego) dissolving like evening’s ash, somewhere * 7/4/2017 John Lawless' And Then It Stopped Contest

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Date: 9/20/2017 12:52:00 PM
I knew there were stars in your hair the moment I saw you. Ha ha. Beautiful pen. Congratulations you fabulous poet you
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Date: 7/19/2017 3:58:00 PM
Awesome poem, Nette. I believe you were at the Nth Dimension emerging from the sea of bottomless joy, experiencing mild spiritual decompression ... and the negative bends bubbles floated off somewhere ... somewhere, who cares. This poem took my consciousness away on a stream of poetic serenity. Mighty fine poem. Love and smiles.
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Date: 7/18/2017 2:33:00 PM
Breathtaking... congrats on your win Miss nette, such an outstanding piece!
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Date: 7/9/2017 8:28:00 PM
Hot garlic butter flowing across warm bread sticks...well penned.
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Date: 7/9/2017 6:32:00 AM
Back to say congratulations, Nette:)
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Date: 7/8/2017 10:14:00 PM
Many congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/8/2017 10:08:00 PM
Wow above and beyond Nette! I see and agree with your amazing poem filling the First place spot. Congratulations! : )
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Date: 7/8/2017 9:09:00 AM
Congratulations Nette :)
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Date: 7/8/2017 7:54:00 AM
Wow! Congratulations on your top win, Nette!
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Date: 7/8/2017 7:48:00 AM
OK, Nette, just one question .... who is your travel agent??? Loved this invitation to a place seemingly so far away where everything stops....thanks for entering the contest
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Date: 7/5/2017 10:31:00 PM
A deep transcendental poem, Nette:)
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Date: 7/5/2017 5:32:00 AM
What can I say? You are a deep soul and a talented poet!
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Date: 7/5/2017 5:22:00 AM
This is enlightening. Your vision and expressive phrases of oneness with the universe refresh me!
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Date: 7/4/2017 2:06:00 PM
- A heavenly experience ... beautifully described, Nette :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/4/2017 12:31:00 PM
Well, I guess there goes my chance of placing:) Another beautiful poem from your river of abundance, nette:)
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Date: 7/4/2017 10:29:00 AM
I think you have this one in the bag with this write, Nette! Great stuff! Best of luck
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