Get Your Premium Membership

Path of Meditation Premiere Contest Winner

somewhere, along an intersection of a mystical dance, I have climbed, levitated and roamed into a pathway of seasonless space, where my fluid, heightened breath circles along veils of astral light sun eclipsing moon: dark-toned, half-streaked... one flick of a star nestled on my blown hair while another winked softly combing a fiery sky, somewhere: a tunnel shapeless and lucent enters inside the skin, refilling the airiness of being flown into a time reborn: ethereal, radiant , fed by something unbidden in my life... I was outside of my body as if some god poured angel tincture on my head… there and then, the noisiness of a kinetic earth-world suddenly stopped while a halo of tranquillity releases all the pride ( ego) dissolving like evening’s ash, somewhere * 7/4/2017 John Lawless' And Then It Stopped Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/20/2017 12:52:00 PM
I knew there were stars in your hair the moment I saw you. Ha ha. Beautiful pen. Congratulations you fabulous poet you
Login to Reply
Date: 7/19/2017 3:58:00 PM
Awesome poem, Nette. I believe you were at the Nth Dimension emerging from the sea of bottomless joy, experiencing mild spiritual decompression ... and the negative bends bubbles floated off somewhere ... somewhere, who cares. This poem took my consciousness away on a stream of poetic serenity. Mighty fine poem. Love and smiles.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/18/2017 2:33:00 PM
Breathtaking... congrats on your win Miss nette, such an outstanding piece!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/9/2017 8:28:00 PM
Hot garlic butter flowing across warm bread sticks...well penned.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/9/2017 6:32:00 AM
Back to say congratulations, Nette:)
Login to Reply
Date: 7/8/2017 10:14:00 PM
Many congrats Nette:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Date: 7/8/2017 10:08:00 PM
Wow above and beyond Nette! I see and agree with your amazing poem filling the First place spot. Congratulations! : )
Login to Reply
Date: 7/8/2017 9:09:00 AM
Congratulations Nette :)
Login to Reply
Date: 7/8/2017 7:54:00 AM
Wow! Congratulations on your top win, Nette!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/8/2017 7:48:00 AM
OK, Nette, just one question .... who is your travel agent??? Loved this invitation to a place seemingly so far away where everything stops....thanks for entering the contest
Login to Reply
Date: 7/5/2017 10:31:00 PM
A deep transcendental poem, Nette:)
Login to Reply
Date: 7/5/2017 5:32:00 AM
What can I say? You are a deep soul and a talented poet!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/5/2017 5:22:00 AM
This is enlightening. Your vision and expressive phrases of oneness with the universe refresh me!
Login to Reply
Date: 7/4/2017 2:06:00 PM
- A heavenly experience ... beautifully described, Nette :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 7/4/2017 12:31:00 PM
Well, I guess there goes my chance of placing:) Another beautiful poem from your river of abundance, nette:)
Login to Reply
Date: 7/4/2017 10:29:00 AM
I think you have this one in the bag with this write, Nette! Great stuff! Best of luck
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs