Pat the Poet

Once Pat was approached at the corner street By Johnny, with his offer, indiscreet. She pulled out her poet's wit With sharp metaphoric grit, And blew his macho off into dead meat. March 30, 2023
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Fowler Avatar
April 17, 2023 at 12:18 PM
LOL. Gotta love when a girl fights her own battles! :)
Ashley Avatar
April 1, 2023 at 8:49 AM
Haha! I love the rapier wit of your limerick, Margarita. Don't ever mess with a poetess! Great imagery and rhymes! Best wishes for the contest and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
Lillico  Avatar
April 1, 2023 at 11:57 AM
Rapier it is :)
Wolf Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 6:29 PM
That last line just slayed me, Margarita. The pen is ever mightier than 'the sword!' lol. Bullseye. ~ gw
Lillico  Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 7:06 PM
I had to meet limerick criteria, last line matters most:)
Parker Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 5:15 PM
Touché to Johnny. Poets can knock your socks off with just a few words. Mightier than the sword!
Turner Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 1:08 PM
where is she now? LOL Very funny, Maggie:)
Lillico  Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 1:21 PM
Immortalized;) It is your luck!!!
Turner Avatar
March 30, 2023 at 1:21 PM
just my luck!
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