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Pat the Poet

Once Pat was approached at the corner street By Johnny, with his offer, indiscreet. She pulled out her poet's wit With sharp metaphoric grit, And blew his macho off into dead meat. March 30, 2023 Sponsor: Line Gauthier Bite Size contest

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Date: 4/17/2023 12:18:00 PM
LOL. Gotta love when a girl fights her own battles! :)
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Date: 4/1/2023 8:49:00 AM
Haha! I love the rapier wit of your limerick, Margarita. Don't ever mess with a poetess! Great imagery and rhymes! Best wishes for the contest and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 4/1/2023 11:57:00 AM
Rapier it is :)
Date: 3/30/2023 6:29:00 PM
That last line just slayed me, Margarita. The pen is ever mightier than 'the sword!' lol. Bullseye. ~ gw
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/30/2023 7:06:00 PM
I had to meet limerick criteria, last line matters most:)
Date: 3/30/2023 5:15:00 PM
Touché to Johnny. Poets can knock your socks off with just a few words. Mightier than the sword!
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Date: 3/30/2023 1:08:00 PM
where is she now? LOL Very funny, Maggie:)
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Margarita Lillico
Date: 3/30/2023 1:21:00 PM
Immortalized;) It is your luck!!!
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Daniel Turner
Date: 3/30/2023 1:21:00 PM
just my luck!

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