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I once met a fat lady called Nettie She ate plate after plate of spaghetti Her face looked a real mess Pasta splashed on her dress She reminded me of a huge yeti 04~13~17

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Pashang Salehi

Date: 4/18/2017 1:02:00 PM

I wish to know you on person you are hilarious

Jan Allison
Date: 4/18/2017 6:44:00 PM

aww thanks Pashang I just try to make people laugh with my poetry:-) hugs Jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/15/2017 9:57:00 AM

Now! This would make me think twice before eating spaghetti, ha ha :) great one, Jan:)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/15/2017 11:52:00 AM

Thanks Jo:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/14/2017 3:05:00 PM

- Funny ... it's a mess to eat spaghetti :))) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/14/2017 3:33:00 PM

It is fun to eat though:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 4/14/2017 11:14:00 AM

Cute Limerick, Jan! Fat lady could be a deterrent, but I'm not giving up my pasta dishes:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 4/14/2017 11:39:00 AM

Nor me Paul lol I just had this image of a huge lady covered in spaghetti bolognaise and sauce lol:-) hugs Jan xx

John Michaels

Date: 4/14/2017 4:26:00 AM

Another great limmerick, Jan! Especially liked the "Yeti" bit! :) Regards, John.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/14/2017 4:58:00 AM

Thanks John:-) hugs Jan xx

Anil Deo

Date: 4/14/2017 3:47:00 AM

You never run out of energy. Write one about the Energizer Bunny, please/ (BTW, a seven: number of shalom/completion). Anil Deo (And thanks for all you do here, and everywhere, in faith and His agape love)

Jan Allison
Date: 4/14/2017 4:11:00 AM

I will try and rise to your challenge Anil lol:-) hugs jan xx

Doug Vinson

Date: 4/13/2017 9:38:00 PM

Jan. : ) Ah, those carbohydrates....

Jan Allison
Date: 4/14/2017 3:17:00 AM

Yes no wonder she's a large lady:-( hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 4/13/2017 4:59:00 PM

another gem of a limerick, jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 4/13/2017 5:10:00 PM

Thanks Ilene I've just written a Pleiades which I hope you will like too:-) hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/13/2017 4:03:00 PM

Haha.."Oh this Italian Nettie/ eating her long spaghetti/licking her thumb/scratchin her bum/ Her surname must be Messy" :) (Could even be Nessie if She eats like a monster.lol..Lovely sweet Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/13/2017 4:14:00 PM

ha ha ha great comment Charma:-) have a wonderful Easter holiday:-) hugs Jan xx

Chris Green

Date: 4/13/2017 3:53:00 PM

Did the splashed sauce on her dress look like confetti? :) Funny Jan except now I am hungry for some Italian food.

Jan Allison
Date: 4/13/2017 3:57:00 PM

lol I like that rhyme Chris:-) we were going out for a meal but the pub didn't serve food for over and hour ... so we went and got a kebab instead - I love Italian food which is good as we are off to Italy on holiday this year:-) hugs Jan xx