Past the Midnight Wasteland

On the late night train away from sense
and into the midnight wasteland,
Old Lady Morbidica vomited blood,
I swore it was the blood
of unsuspecting travelers.
She bent her back, then sank to her knees,
and spewed into plastic bags,
it was her lifelong custom,
three plastic bags at a time
at least a couple of times a day.
I trembled with my travelling companion,
a changeling as I might have predicted.
Her only child, nameless and mythical,
traveled with her, high crimes in tow,
high crimes not directly known
but surely the highest crimes just the same.
Legend was he had a fourteen inch legend
but we were more concerned with high crimes.
We feared that Old Lady Morbidica
would cast a spell that we could not escape,
we dared not close our eyes
or with her spell she might reach our arteries
and vomit our blood into plastic bags,
it was her lifelong custom.
We feared that her son, one alone,
would cleave us open from throat to groin
and feed our innards to the pigs
running alongside the train in the night,
offering magical pig-like power
in exchange for the innards
of unsuspecting travelers.
We lay alongside one another
and she came to us in the smallest hours.
Strangely, Old Lady Morbidica smiled,
she looked unexpectedly benign,
she fell into my arms and whimpered,
I said nice things and comforted her.
Her nameless and mythical child
stood over us, he was quite plain,
next to me, still, my travelling companion, 
now changed, as I should have known;
we all sang silly sweet songs,
the kind you’ll only hear
on Radio Kindergarten,
or on family-friendly CheeseTV;
we laughed with relief 
and sobbed with shame.

4th March 2019

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 3/10/2019 7:28:00 AM
At first, I thought that I would want nothing to do with Old Lady Morbidica then, after reading the end of the poem I wished that I had met her lol Love this, Lawrence. Have a wonderful Sunday and best wishes as always my poetry brother. Charlie
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/10/2019 8:40:00 AM
Thanks, Charlie, glad you liked this one. Stay cool, my friend.
Date: 3/5/2019 5:53:00 AM
This is truly Poe'esq dark verse my dear friend. A weaving tale of Gothic horror and darkness, one so superbly conceived and executed! An imaginative and finely penned piece on the evil and dark that exists in this world.. A fav, a true gem of dark poetry..
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Date: 3/5/2019 9:12:00 AM
Thanks so much, Robert, very encouraging words from a connoisseur of dark literature such as yourself. Always appreciated, my friend.
Date: 3/4/2019 3:07:00 PM
What a story my friend! Definitely well beyond the ordinary..intense and horrifying..with quite an unexpected ending. Kudos for your imagination, Lawrence.
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Lawrence Sharp
Date: 3/4/2019 10:30:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay, always good to get your feedback, my friend.
Date: 3/4/2019 12:07:00 PM
I feel like I am there, but don't wish to be. I am lingering in the shadows. This is deep, powerful and chilling- all at the same time. You certainly have a way with words. Creating the mood, the moment. ~ Brandy
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Date: 3/4/2019 10:29:00 PM
Thanks, Brandy, if you got anything from it, job done (it might be a tough one to actually enjoy).
Date: 3/4/2019 11:36:00 AM
with an intriguing tale such as this, i am in awe of your mythical prowess, lawrence... huggs
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Date: 3/4/2019 10:28:00 PM
Thanks, Nette, very glad if you enjoyed.
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