Past the Line of Sight

I'm teaching myself to blur the line. Distorting Depth; reality 
Firing tiny bullets, no one can see. Changing life to one dimention.
You breathe the air I breathe. 
But you can't see what I see. 
I am. 
But who am I? 
I think 
Breathe 
But do I exist? 
Am I real? 
Hardly. 
I'm teaching myself to change the tides. Dwelling hell; fantasy 
Thinking little evils, invisible things 
Seeing life in forms and colors 
You see what I see, 
But you could never ever believe 
You are. 
But not me. 
Control 
Losing 
But never again. 
Raining? 
Always
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 8, 2011 at 5:45 AM
Love it!--kashinath
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February 6, 2011 at 7:31 PM
does make you think, enjoyed this one,..p.d.
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