Premiere Contest WinnerPast the Graveyard: Rondeau

Past the graveyard deep in snow
where icicles from boughs hang low
one woman at a headstone weeps
as memories in warmth she keeps,
all dressed in black like winter crows.

Still muted angels' trumpets blow
where frost on trees like lichens grow
and 'cross the powder darkness creeps
past the graveyard.

As by the iron fence I go
the granite gapes in pewter rows. 
My heart into my throat now leaps;
her mortal love in silence sleeps
in frozen ground while snowflakes blow
past the graveyard.

11/14/17

This is a rewrite of my Terzanelle, "I Pass the Graveyard".
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Dietrich Avatar
February 19, 2018 at 12:16 PM
Oh and this one I remember so well. I think you have more than a few on that list. You are one of the best for how you are faring on that list!!
Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 8:00 PM
wow, this one has so many elements like the one I did on the same topic!! I also used a really old poem of mine and rewrote it with new stuff in the poem, but I also had the low hanging boughs and a crow in my poem. Certain rhymes just go so well together with blow, snow, etc!! I see you got a trophy win and it's very well deserved. BIG congrats
Cozart Avatar
January 28, 2018 at 8:39 PM
Thanks so much, Andrea! Which poem was it? I'd like to read it.
Ashley Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 7:41 PM
Dale, returning with another round of congratulations on your excellent win!
Cozart Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 8:10 PM
Thanks, Susan.
Roper Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 5:12 PM
Congratulations, Dale, a great write. Hugs Eve ~`*
Cozart Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 5:45 PM
Thanks, Eve!
Allison Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 1:47 PM
dropping back again Dale:-) hugs jan xx
Cozart Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 2:26 PM
Hi, Jan! Thank you!
Scars Avatar
December 4, 2017 at 6:35 AM
I always love this form! great poem dear Dale :) thank you and congrats :)
Wood Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 3:59 PM
Oh, this is well done Dale. I haven't been on for a while but I still get the POTD. I get to read the poems but can't see the author. This one caught my eye and I just had to follow it back to see who wrote this gem. I am not suprised to see it was you. Great job!
Wood Avatar
November 21, 2017 at 10:38 AM
I just need a break Dale. I found I wasn't writing for myself anymore. I'll be back more now that winter is setting in. Regards, Dean
Cozart Avatar
November 20, 2017 at 4:07 PM
Thanks, Dean! Where have you been? It's nice to hear from you!
Daniel Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 6:09 AM
Beautiful dark rondeau, Dale, double congratulations on POTD and your win:)
Cozart Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 8:20 AM
Thanks so much, Jo!
Barden Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 3:39 AM
Congrats on your win, Dale - wonderful write!
Cozart Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 8:19 AM
Thanks much, Greg!
Allison Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 9:48 AM
Dropping back again with my congrats on your trophy win Dale:-) hugs Jan xx
Cozart Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 10:02 AM
Thanks so much, Jan!!
Ashley Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 10:46 PM
Back again to congratulate you Dale on your well deserved first place win with your fantastic poem! :)
Cozart Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 10:02 AM
Thanks, Susan!
Gauthier Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 8:10 PM
Very touching imagery, Dale. Congrats on your win.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 1:55 PM
Beautiful rondeau, Dale. Expertly done by your deft pen. I love the dark, Gothic themes. Yes, I was whistling while reading ... lol! Will read the terzanelle now. Love and smile always.
Cozart Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 2:00 PM
Thanks, Freddie! I chuckled when you said you were whistling. That's very clever. I hadn't even thought of that!
Medders Tobechi Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 12:34 PM
Congratulations on your win. Splendid rondeau.
Cozart Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 1:00 PM
Thanks very much, Janis!
Marcum Wong Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 11:33 AM
Oh I love both of them! Your Terzanelle was so great and memorable that I knew instantly I had read it before. Bravo! ; )
Cozart Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 11:40 AM
Thanks so much, Connie!
Roper Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 8:54 PM
Congratulations on POTD, Dale. Hugs eve
Cozart Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 11:40 AM
Thanks, Eve.
Lawless Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 7:45 PM
Very nicely done Dale...a tricky rhyme scheme and meter .... congrats on POTD
S     Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 6:57 PM
Dale ... I so admire your fluid meter !! It makes this such an enjoyable read :) Haunting and beautiful. Congratulations on POTD. Best, Judy
Cozart Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 7:32 PM
Thanks so much, Judy!
Wastvedt Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 4:30 PM
Very beautiful written Rondeau Poem! :)
Cozart Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 5:19 PM
Thanks so much, Bjorn!
Andresen Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 12:06 PM
- Beautiful poem, Dale - Congratulations on your p.ot.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cozart Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 12:11 PM
Thanks, AL!
Ashley Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 10:49 AM
Returning to congratulate you Dale on your well-deserved POTD! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Cozart Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 12:11 PM
Thanks, Susan.
Warrior Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 10:37 AM
Congrats!!! my friend...well deserving of POTD!!!...best wishes...^WW^
Cozart Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 10:50 AM
Thanks very much, WW!
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November 15, 2017 at 9:45 AM
Congratulations on your awesome POTD Dale! Hugs and smiles :)
Cozart Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 9:48 AM
Thanks, Akkina!
Wanter Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 9:44 AM
I can certainly understand why you were chosen POTD. Your poem has it all - form, emotion, symbolism, great similes.
Cozart Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 9:48 AM
Thanks so much, Sun!
Mccall Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 7:59 AM
A very beautiful yet somber poem very well written. I love the line; Still muted angels' trumpets blow. Well done Dale and congrats on POTD
Cozart Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 8:05 AM
Thanks, Edward.
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