Past Addiction

A quiet café, perfect for my Paris musings
never been there, but read the books, seen the movies.
Two tables sans ashtrays, anyway the café is empty, 
I order espresso, bitter coffee, sweet milk froth steaming.
You enter, and sit at your table, separate but not too far away
nervous smiles, green eyes glance at blue, watching me watching you;
my face flushes,  breath quickens, do you feel it too? 
Your tongue flits from lush lips to laps the cream from your cappuccino
Your white teeth smile, you lean back and light
your  cigarette, no filter, dark French tobacco. 
Cursing my past addiction,  I know it can never be.
quickly finish my  coffee, leave my sum
rise and return to my cubicle,
knowing our paths will never cross again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 11/27/2016 10:43:00 PM
tres bon
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Date: 2/27/2014 10:02:00 AM
A sweet fantasy. Is the addiction women or tobacco?
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Date: 2/11/2014 8:13:00 AM
Lovely write on the café musings and congrats on the win, roger
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 2/11/2014 8:18:00 AM
Many thanks and congrats on your own 1st place poem on the same subject
Date: 2/11/2014 7:18:00 AM
Roger congrats on fine win hugs
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 2/11/2014 8:10:00 AM
Thanks Shadow, it was the first contest I've entered here and its an honour to place
Date: 2/2/2014 8:17:00 AM
"nervous smiles, green eyes glance at blue, watching me watching you" Nice poem. Nice line.
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D.W. Rodgers
Date: 2/2/2014 10:55:00 AM
Thanks Christine, I think "watching me - watching you" comes from The Turning Point, an early John Mayal album, but I've yet to figure out which song.
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