Passions of the Night

Oh, mythical fairy, how bashfully you woo me tonight
Attuning love’s lyrics to music of the passionate night
Alluring astral delight, the moon and stars you invite
Dazzling passions emanating from your enticing eyes
Twinkling celestial heights in scintillating smitten skies
Seducing tenor of fiery night, as sparks of love ignite
Inflaming sensuous hearts under opulent moonlight
As the lady of mystique embraces her beloved knight.

Whirling rhythms of my tempo in glamorous dance
My desires you waltz beaming glances of romance
Hypnotizing me brazenly in clutches of exotic stance
Arousing flirtatious entreaties clamoring to conceive
Tantalizing sensibilities yearnings of bosoms weave
In forbidden web of transgressions, longing to unseal
Secrets of fantasy world, titillating your occult zeal,
As essence of love’s enigma surrenders to my appeal.

Savor my dear, elixir of life, before it’s time to depart
Painting portrait of this union on canvas of my heart
Narrating love poetically, reminiscent of Rumi’s glory
Adorning fable-eternal, scripting rhapsodic allegory
Beholden to doting night, unwilling to meet the dawn,
As echoes of our heart-bells endlessly toll on and on
Urging for this dream to live on, stilling reign of time,
Cuddling pleasures divine, satiating fantasies sublime.

September 24, 2020
Placed 2nd: The night of passion and desire poetry contest
Sponsor: Faraz Ajmal

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Date: 12/20/2021 3:09:00 AM
"Savor my dear, elixir of life, before it’s time to depart Painting portrait of this union on canvas of my heart Narrating love poetically, reminiscent of Rumi’s glory Adorning fable-eternal, scripting rhapsodic allegory"..... I see Raphael or Michael Angelo immortalizing your night love into a masterpiece of art or Rumi making it into an all time enjoyable rhapsody. Simply marvelous !
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Date: 12/30/2020 6:38:00 AM
An enjoyable read. Happy New Year and thanks for your kind Visit. ;0)
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Date: 10/11/2020 3:27:00 PM
A wonderful write Vijay, congrats on a sizzling write and win!
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Date: 10/11/2020 12:37:00 AM
A breathtaking romantic poem, Vijay, congratulations on your awesome win:)
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Date: 10/10/2020 5:22:00 PM
Way to go with your wonderful win, Vijay. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/10/2020 4:47:00 PM
What an awesome, romantic piece this is, filled with sublime love and passion! Wonderfully written dear poet! Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Hugs. Pandita
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Date: 10/10/2020 12:26:00 PM
The imagery, passion and rhythm of this poem, everything about it was perfect, this poem was my instant favorite, many congratulations on your win in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 10/2/2020 10:59:00 AM
Sounds like a good dream. This is very alluring. I wish I had a dream like that. :) Beautiful write. I really enjoyed it. Peace, Angie
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/2/2020 2:22:00 PM
Thank you Angela--much appreciate.
Date: 9/29/2020 3:29:00 PM
how the senses come alive when you speak of love in the night, vijay...enjoyed the element of fantasy!...huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/30/2020 5:52:00 AM
Much appreciate Nette--many thanks.
Date: 9/29/2020 12:29:00 PM
It is a joy to hear the music of the night through your stunning descriptions, Vijay. How wonderful it would be to have a love who is the "elixer of life." A wonderful entry for the contest, my friend, and a fave for me. Surely a winner! Hugs, Carolyn
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/30/2020 5:54:00 AM
Always a delight when you visit my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks, Carolyn. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 9/27/2020 11:33:00 AM
This has Rumi's inspiration on it and your excellence too Vijay, Well written piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing,
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/29/2020 8:11:00 AM
Much appreciate my friend. Many thanks, Vienna.
Date: 9/26/2020 2:19:00 PM
Vividly and dramatically descriptive and so romantic, delightful, Vijay! Janice
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Date: 9/27/2020 5:33:00 AM
Much appreciate Janice--many many thanks.
Date: 9/25/2020 6:07:00 AM
Passionate, romantic and so filling and feeling... A lovely work of art. God bless you with a win, my friend
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/25/2020 12:52:00 PM
Thank you Gina--much appreciate.
Date: 9/24/2020 6:48:00 PM
very passionate indeed Vijay. I really enjoyed the contest theme. I can tell you did as well.
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Date: 9/25/2020 5:49:00 AM
Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.
Date: 9/24/2020 2:10:00 PM
Oh my !! Once again you have created such a beautiful moment with your words. This is soft, tender and passionate. Simply breathtaking my dear friend. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2020 2:22:00 PM
Always a delight to read your feedback, my dear friend. Much appreciate your comments, Brandy. Many many thanks.
Date: 9/24/2020 2:09:00 PM
Beautiful, romantic poetry Vijay, a delightful, passionate read. Belle
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2020 2:21:00 PM
You are very kind Belle. Much appreciate your visit and comments--many thanks.
Date: 9/24/2020 12:10:00 PM
Wow, I felt myself lost in your beautiful poem! Excellent Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2020 2:20:00 PM
So wonderful to hear that from you Heidi. Much appreciate as always. Many thanks.
Date: 9/24/2020 11:11:00 AM
Hello Vijay Pandit, I was reading your poem, to discover how romantic it is written. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2020 11:27:00 AM
Much appreciate Darlene--many many thanks for your visit and comments.
Date: 9/24/2020 10:53:00 AM
- A wonderful poem, Vijay ... it glows with romance ... an impressive poem - Best wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2020 11:26:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise--much appreciate, as always.
Date: 9/24/2020 8:54:00 AM
Your passionate poetry is always stunning, as is this one - 'My desires you waltz beaming glances of romance' ........... Secrets of fantasy world, titillating your occult zeal' WOW Vijay - good luck in the contest , not that you need it. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2020 11:26:00 AM
Very kind of you to say so my friend. Much appreciate, Jennifer. Many thanks.
Date: 9/24/2020 8:36:00 AM
The theme of this contest has inspired you to poetic heights, Vijay. Fantasy & Imagination both combined to produce another excellent offering from you. Regards // paul
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2020 11:25:00 AM
Much appreciate Paul. Many thanks for the kind remarks. Regards.
Date: 9/24/2020 6:18:00 AM
At my age passion is a low ebb but reading this poem must have awaked my few sleeping emotions. Brilliantly done. No need to wish you luck, surely you are at your best. ~~
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2020 7:53:00 AM
Always happy to read your comments--much appreciate, Victor. Many many thanks.
Date: 9/24/2020 5:24:00 AM
These are phenomenal verses of rhyming romance, Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2020 7:52:00 AM
So nice of you to say so--much appreciate, Jenna. Many thanks.
Date: 9/24/2020 5:15:00 AM
A very passionate and romantic verse Vijay, you write these so well, good luck in the contest. Tom
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2020 7:51:00 AM
Much appreciate Tom--you are so very kind. Many thanks.
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