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Passions of the Night

Oh, mythical fairy, how bashfully you woo me tonight Attuning love’s lyrics to music of the passionate night Alluring astral delight, the moon and stars you invite Dazzling passions emanating from your enticing eyes Twinkling celestial heights in scintillating smitten skies Seducing tenor of fiery night, as sparks of love ignite Inflaming sensuous hearts under opulent moonlight As the lady of mystique embraces her beloved knight. Whirling rhythms of my tempo in glamorous dance My desires you waltz beaming glances of romance Hypnotizing me brazenly in clutches of exotic stance Arousing flirtatious entreaties clamoring to conceive Tantalizing sensibilities yearnings of bosoms weave In forbidden web of transgressions, longing to unseal Secrets of fantasy world, titillating your occult zeal, As essence of love’s enigma surrenders to my appeal. Savor my dear, elixir of life, before it’s time to depart Painting portrait of this union on canvas of my heart Narrating love poetically, reminiscent of Rumi’s glory Adorning fable-eternal, scripting rhapsodic allegory Beholden to doting night, unwilling to meet the dawn, As echoes of our heart-bells endlessly toll on and on Urging for this dream to live on, stilling reign of time, Cuddling pleasures divine, satiating fantasies sublime. September 24, 2020 Placed 2nd: The night of passion and desire poetry contest Sponsor: Faraz Ajmal

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Valsa George

Date: 12/20/2021 3:09:00 AM

"Savor my dear, elixir of life, before it’s time to depart Painting portrait of this union on canvas of my heart Narrating love poetically, reminiscent of Rumi’s glory Adorning fable-eternal, scripting rhapsodic allegory"..... I see Raphael or Michael Angelo immortalizing your night love into a masterpiece of art or Rumi making it into an all time enjoyable rhapsody. Simply marvelous !

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/30/2020 6:38:00 AM

An enjoyable read. Happy New Year and thanks for your kind Visit. ;0)

John Hamilton

Date: 10/11/2020 3:27:00 PM

A wonderful write Vijay, congrats on a sizzling write and win!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/11/2020 12:37:00 AM

A breathtaking romantic poem, Vijay, congratulations on your awesome win:)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/10/2020 5:22:00 PM

Way to go with your wonderful win, Vijay. Congratulations.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 10/10/2020 4:47:00 PM

What an awesome, romantic piece this is, filled with sublime love and passion! Wonderfully written dear poet! Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Hugs. Pandita

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 10/10/2020 12:26:00 PM

The imagery, passion and rhythm of this poem, everything about it was perfect, this poem was my instant favorite, many congratulations on your win in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day

Angela Crabtree

Date: 10/2/2020 10:59:00 AM

Sounds like a good dream. This is very alluring. I wish I had a dream like that. :) Beautiful write. I really enjoyed it. Peace, Angie

Vijay Pandit
Date: 10/2/2020 2:22:00 PM

Thank you Angela--much appreciate.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/29/2020 3:29:00 PM

how the senses come alive when you speak of love in the night, vijay...enjoyed the element of fantasy!...huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/30/2020 5:52:00 AM

Much appreciate Nette--many thanks.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/29/2020 12:29:00 PM

It is a joy to hear the music of the night through your stunning descriptions, Vijay. How wonderful it would be to have a love who is the "elixer of life." A wonderful entry for the contest, my friend, and a fave for me. Surely a winner! Hugs, Carolyn

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/30/2020 5:54:00 AM

Always a delight when you visit my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks, Carolyn. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/27/2020 11:33:00 AM

This has Rumi's inspiration on it and your excellence too Vijay, Well written piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing,

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/29/2020 8:11:00 AM

Much appreciate my friend. Many thanks, Vienna.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/26/2020 2:19:00 PM

Vividly and dramatically descriptive and so romantic, delightful, Vijay! Janice

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/27/2020 5:33:00 AM

Much appreciate Janice--many many thanks.

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/25/2020 6:07:00 AM

Passionate, romantic and so filling and feeling... A lovely work of art. God bless you with a win, my friend

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/25/2020 12:52:00 PM

Thank you Gina--much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/24/2020 6:48:00 PM

very passionate indeed Vijay. I really enjoyed the contest theme. I can tell you did as well.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/25/2020 5:49:00 AM

Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/24/2020 2:10:00 PM

Oh my !! Once again you have created such a beautiful moment with your words. This is soft, tender and passionate. Simply breathtaking my dear friend. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2020 2:22:00 PM

Always a delight to read your feedback, my dear friend. Much appreciate your comments, Brandy. Many many thanks.

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 9/24/2020 2:09:00 PM

Beautiful, romantic poetry Vijay, a delightful, passionate read. Belle

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2020 2:21:00 PM

You are very kind Belle. Much appreciate your visit and comments--many thanks.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/24/2020 12:10:00 PM

Wow, I felt myself lost in your beautiful poem! Excellent Vijay :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2020 2:20:00 PM

So wonderful to hear that from you Heidi. Much appreciate as always. Many thanks.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/24/2020 11:11:00 AM

Hello Vijay Pandit, I was reading your poem, to discover how romantic it is written. Enjoy your day my friend.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2020 11:27:00 AM

Much appreciate Darlene--many many thanks for your visit and comments.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/24/2020 10:53:00 AM

- A wonderful poem, Vijay ... it glows with romance ... an impressive poem - Best wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2020 11:26:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise--much appreciate, as always.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/24/2020 8:54:00 AM

Your passionate poetry is always stunning, as is this one - 'My desires you waltz beaming glances of romance' ........... Secrets of fantasy world, titillating your occult zeal' WOW Vijay - good luck in the contest , not that you need it. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2020 11:26:00 AM

Very kind of you to say so my friend. Much appreciate, Jennifer. Many thanks.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/24/2020 8:36:00 AM

The theme of this contest has inspired you to poetic heights, Vijay. Fantasy & Imagination both combined to produce another excellent offering from you. Regards // paul

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2020 11:25:00 AM

Much appreciate Paul. Many thanks for the kind remarks. Regards.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/24/2020 6:18:00 AM

At my age passion is a low ebb but reading this poem must have awaked my few sleeping emotions. Brilliantly done. No need to wish you luck, surely you are at your best. ~~

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2020 7:53:00 AM

Always happy to read your comments--much appreciate, Victor. Many many thanks.

Jenna Logan

Date: 9/24/2020 5:24:00 AM

These are phenomenal verses of rhyming romance, Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2020 7:52:00 AM

So nice of you to say so--much appreciate, Jenna. Many thanks.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/24/2020 5:15:00 AM

A very passionate and romantic verse Vijay, you write these so well, good luck in the contest. Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 9/24/2020 7:51:00 AM

Much appreciate Tom--you are so very kind. Many thanks.