Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

Passions of the Night

Oh, mythical fairy, how bashfully you woo me tonight
Attuning love’s lyrics to music of the passionate night
Alluring astral delight, the moon and stars you invite
Dazzling passions emanating from your enticing eyes
Twinkling celestial heights in scintillating smitten skies
Seducing tenor of fiery night, as sparks of love ignite
Inflaming sensuous hearts under opulent moonlight
As the lady of mystique embraces her beloved knight.

Whirling rhythms of my tempo in glamorous dance
My desires you waltz beaming glances of romance
Hypnotizing me brazenly in clutches of exotic stance
Arousing flirtatious entreaties clamoring to conceive
Tantalizing sensibilities yearnings of bosoms weave
In forbidden web of transgressions, longing to unseal
Secrets of fantasy world, titillating your occult zeal,
As essence of love’s enigma surrenders to my appeal.

Savor my dear, elixir of life, before it’s time to depart
Painting portrait of this union on canvas of my heart
Narrating love poetically, reminiscent of Rumi’s glory
Adorning fable-eternal, scripting rhapsodic allegory
Beholden to doting night, unwilling to meet the dawn,
As echoes of our heart-bells endlessly toll on and on
Urging for this dream to live on, stilling reign of time,
Cuddling pleasures divine, satiating fantasies sublime.

September 24, 2020
Placed 2nd: The night of passion and desire poetry contest
Sponsor: Faraz Ajmal

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Valsa George December 20, 2021 at 3:09 AM "Savor my dear, elixir of life, before it’s time to depart Painting portrait of this union on canvas of my heart Narrating love poetically, reminiscent of Rumi’s glory Adorning fable-eternal, scripting rhapsodic allegory"..... I see Raphael or Michael Angelo immortalizing your night love into a masterpiece of art or Rumi making it into an all time enjoyable rhapsody. Simply marvelous !

Richard Lamoureux December 30, 2020 at 6:38 AM An enjoyable read. Happy New Year and thanks for your kind Visit. ;0)

John Hamilton October 11, 2020 at 3:27 PM A wonderful write Vijay, congrats on a sizzling write and win!

Joanna Daniel October 11, 2020 at 12:37 AM A breathtaking romantic poem, Vijay, congratulations on your awesome win:)

Andrea Dietrich October 10, 2020 at 5:22 PM Way to go with your wonderful win, Vijay. Congratulations.

Pandita Sietesantos October 10, 2020 at 4:47 PM What an awesome, romantic piece this is, filled with sublime love and passion! Wonderfully written dear poet! Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Hugs. Pandita

Faraz Ajmal October 10, 2020 at 12:26 PM The imagery, passion and rhythm of this poem, everything about it was perfect, this poem was my instant favorite, many congratulations on your win in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day

Angela Crabtree October 2, 2020 at 10:59 AM Sounds like a good dream. This is very alluring. I wish I had a dream like that. :) Beautiful write. I really enjoyed it. Peace, Angie Vijay Pandit October 2, 2020 at 2:22 PM Thank you Angela--much appreciate.

Nette Onclaud September 29, 2020 at 3:29 PM how the senses come alive when you speak of love in the night, vijay...enjoyed the element of fantasy!...huggs Vijay Pandit September 30, 2020 at 5:52 AM Much appreciate Nette--many thanks.

Carolyn Devonshire September 29, 2020 at 12:29 PM It is a joy to hear the music of the night through your stunning descriptions, Vijay. How wonderful it would be to have a love who is the "elixer of life." A wonderful entry for the contest, my friend, and a fave for me. Surely a winner! Hugs, Carolyn Vijay Pandit September 30, 2020 at 5:54 AM Always a delight when you visit my friend. Much appreciate your kind remarks. Many thanks, Carolyn. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Mystic Rose Rose September 27, 2020 at 11:33 AM This has Rumi's inspiration on it and your excellence too Vijay, Well written piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing, Vijay Pandit September 29, 2020 at 8:11 AM Much appreciate my friend. Many thanks, Vienna.

Janice Canerdy September 26, 2020 at 2:19 PM Vividly and dramatically descriptive and so romantic, delightful, Vijay! Janice Vijay Pandit September 27, 2020 at 5:33 AM Much appreciate Janice--many many thanks.

Regina Mcintosh September 25, 2020 at 6:07 AM Passionate, romantic and so filling and feeling... A lovely work of art. God bless you with a win, my friend Vijay Pandit September 25, 2020 at 12:52 PM Thank you Gina--much appreciate.

Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2020 at 6:48 PM very passionate indeed Vijay. I really enjoyed the contest theme. I can tell you did as well. Vijay Pandit September 25, 2020 at 5:49 AM Much appreciate Andrea--many thanks.

Brandy Nicole September 24, 2020 at 2:10 PM Oh my !! Once again you have created such a beautiful moment with your words. This is soft, tender and passionate. Simply breathtaking my dear friend. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit September 24, 2020 at 2:22 PM Always a delight to read your feedback, my dear friend. Much appreciate your comments, Brandy. Many many thanks.

Beryl Edmonds September 24, 2020 at 2:09 PM Beautiful, romantic poetry Vijay, a delightful, passionate read. Belle Vijay Pandit September 24, 2020 at 2:21 PM You are very kind Belle. Much appreciate your visit and comments--many thanks.

Heidi Sands September 24, 2020 at 12:10 PM Wow, I felt myself lost in your beautiful poem! Excellent Vijay :) Vijay Pandit September 24, 2020 at 2:20 PM So wonderful to hear that from you Heidi. Much appreciate as always. Many thanks.

Darlene De Beaulieu September 24, 2020 at 11:11 AM Hello Vijay Pandit, I was reading your poem, to discover how romantic it is written. Enjoy your day my friend. Vijay Pandit September 24, 2020 at 11:27 AM Much appreciate Darlene--many many thanks for your visit and comments.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 24, 2020 at 10:53 AM - A wonderful poem, Vijay ... it glows with romance ... an impressive poem - Best wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit September 24, 2020 at 11:26 AM Thank you Anne-Lise--much appreciate, as always.

Jennifer Proxenos September 24, 2020 at 8:54 AM Your passionate poetry is always stunning, as is this one - 'My desires you waltz beaming glances of romance' ........... Secrets of fantasy world, titillating your occult zeal' WOW Vijay - good luck in the contest , not that you need it. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Vijay Pandit September 24, 2020 at 11:26 AM Very kind of you to say so my friend. Much appreciate, Jennifer. Many thanks.

Paul Callus September 24, 2020 at 8:36 AM The theme of this contest has inspired you to poetic heights, Vijay. Fantasy & Imagination both combined to produce another excellent offering from you. Regards // paul Vijay Pandit September 24, 2020 at 11:25 AM Much appreciate Paul. Many thanks for the kind remarks. Regards.

Victor Buhagiar September 24, 2020 at 6:18 AM At my age passion is a low ebb but reading this poem must have awaked my few sleeping emotions. Brilliantly done. No need to wish you luck, surely you are at your best. ~~ Vijay Pandit September 24, 2020 at 7:53 AM Always happy to read your comments--much appreciate, Victor. Many many thanks.

Jenna Logan September 24, 2020 at 5:24 AM These are phenomenal verses of rhyming romance, Vijay. Vijay Pandit September 24, 2020 at 7:52 AM So nice of you to say so--much appreciate, Jenna. Many thanks.

Tom Cunningham September 24, 2020 at 5:15 AM A very passionate and romantic verse Vijay, you write these so well, good luck in the contest. Tom Vijay Pandit September 24, 2020 at 7:51 AM Much appreciate Tom--you are so very kind. Many thanks.