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For the Love Jones poetry contest by Karen and Tahj Jones.

There is nothing I have more passion for than my beloved.

I could adorn you with great riches, but my greatest gift to you is my poetry. Lost in the gravity of your love, my soul has lost control of its senses, floating in euphoria, ecstasy and elation. In the presence of your beauty, even the stars hide with envy. My muse that was once mute, is now briskly blooming at night. My simple musings were without meaning, before the first glimpse of your elegance. Now my heart is whispering to the sky, enchanted by shades of dreamy indigo nightfall, as twilight glows in clementine and violet hues. An end to monotone blackberry skies, as the earth creates colours in time for our union. Moonlight illuminates our dream world, as pearls appear, radiantly reflecting, like a constellation in your eyes. Your luscious lips like merlot petals, entice with soft sensual warm breaths. As we blend, it feels like the air is alive. Consumed in intimate infatuation, inhibitions fade in slow motion, as desires dissolve like a secret of the stars.

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Date: 12/1/2023 8:44:00 PM
Very sensual and beautifully romantic. The whole poem is strewn with expressions of consuming love. "My muse that was once mute, is now briskly blooming at night." Yes, you were mute and silent for sometime, now we see you making your continued presence felt, by scripting poems after poems. Enjoyed this beautiful song of love, dear friend.
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Date: 11/30/2023 11:01:00 PM
wonderful declaration, poet, subtle sentiments expressend that will touch the "target", i hope, tahnks for sharing this élégant poem yann
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Date: 11/30/2023 8:11:00 PM
Very pretty. I noticed you write in the style of Empress. Especially with this one!
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Date: 11/30/2023 5:58:00 PM
Fabulous entry my friend. I suspect it will do very well.
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Date: 11/30/2023 5:15:00 PM
"An end to monotone blackberry skies, as the earth colours in time for our union." Indeed, love gives fond meaning to life. Beautiful poetry my friend. Blessings.
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Date: 11/30/2023 3:47:00 PM
Hello Silent One, I felt the passion in this poem. More romantic under the stars. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene/
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Date: 11/30/2023 12:33:00 PM
Well done dear poet, a passionate poem worthy of the love from which it springs
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Date: 11/30/2023 12:16:00 PM
Oh my oh my SO….what an absolutely powerful and very beautiful poem of real love and adoration! “In the presence of your beauty even the stars hide with envy” l just love that!! In fact my hubby says that to me each morning….NOT!! Hehe!! Debx
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Date: 11/30/2023 11:44:00 AM
Your passion for poetry resonates throughout, SO. A splendid blend of poetic art and love.
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Date: 11/30/2023 11:41:00 AM
So beautiful poem!
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Date: 11/30/2023 10:37:00 AM
there'z no silence here dear poet ;)....have a wonderful writing season....much love, james
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Date: 11/30/2023 9:42:00 AM
Your poetry is the secret of a thousand love stories yet to unfold beneath the stars. I love your winning poem Silent One, you are a success story to me, :)
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Date: 11/30/2023 7:27:00 AM
Wahh this is absolutely amazing! It made my heart skip a beat and tighten at the same time.. This made images form in my head of a lovey couple that were just absolutely smitten in love.. This is incredible.. truly truly amazing..
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Date: 11/30/2023 7:18:00 AM
Ah silent one, this is so beautiful, you are one the best I know for romance, you write romance like as if you breathe love and compassion like no other. I cant help but be in awe, wishing my beloved would write a poem like this for me lol! I think i should show him your poems ask him to learn how to be romantic like this hah. I really love the opening lines, theres nothing as precious as poetry and true love, no materialistic whatever can replace that, i really love the delicate and soft flow
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Date: 11/30/2023 7:20:00 AM
Especially “ My muse that was once mute, is now briskly blooming at night.” awwn i can resonate with that. “ as pearls appear, radiantly reflecting, like a constellation in your eyes.“ how gorgeous is the way you describe! You really are an artist. “ Consumed in intimate infatuation, inhibitions fade in slow motion, as desires luster like a secret of the stars.“ perfect ending! Just love this! Definitely a fave! May your muse forever be blooming like a red merlot rose
Date: 11/30/2023 7:04:00 AM
Beautiful, brilliant, breathtaking. I love this so, sweet friend. A sure win. God bless you always, love, Gina
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