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'passion's Oath'

capricious strokes all over
sentient lit my senses 
the tenderness on  your face…
a pledge of passion


Contest: "Spicy" (Ladies Only)
Placed: 1st 
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Copyright © Wilma Neels | Year Posted 2011

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January 24, 2011 at 1:26 PM

Hello Wilma, Just lovely, well done my dear. Congratulations As Always, Shar

Poet Destroyer A

January 23, 2011 at 3:52 PM

Wilma~ A late Congratulation~ on your #1 win in Michael's hot contest,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 23, 2011 at 8:21 AM

Congratulations Wilma, on your win in the "Spicy" contest sponsored by Michael. Love, Carol

January 23, 2011 at 6:26 AM

a romantic write! Congrad's On your win Light & Love

January 22, 2011 at 7:35 PM

wow Wilma. Many wonderful congratulations for this win.

January 22, 2011 at 7:09 PM

Superb entry. Congratulations on your win.

January 22, 2011 at 2:51 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

January 22, 2011 at 1:22 PM

Hey, A big congratulations to you, my friend. How wonderful with your spicy poem. Luv, Andrea

January 22, 2011 at 9:29 AM

KUDOS to you for this well-deserved win, wilma.. much enjoyed! :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 22, 2011 at 6:05 AM

Congrats Wilma on your first place win in the Spicy for ladies only contest with this wonderful write luv... great one my friend..

Michael J. Falotico

January 22, 2011 at 5:57 AM

Congrats my dear with your 1st palce win in my first contest...I loved it!!! luv Michael

January 22, 2011 at 5:55 AM

Hi Wilma - Congratulations on your BIG WIN in the "SPICY" contest. Best wishes, KC

January 3, 2011 at 7:44 AM

Very good one..If for one of the contest good luck..Enjoyed reading very much..Thanks for your faithfulness in commenting on my work..Sara

January 3, 2011 at 4:18 AM

Very juicy and spicy write, Wilma. Good luck in the contest.

Andrea Dietrich

January 2, 2011 at 9:54 PM

Yes, very nice, Wilma. Love those capricious strokes!!! and tenderness too. Luv, Andrea

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