Linda-Marie Sweetheart Poet Rhyme

Passion's Lustful Cape

     "Passion's Lustful Cape"




Selfish motives tempted heart
you threw caution to wild wind
Passion's lustful cape,  Choked our sweet love drape
broken pieces wound for you have sinned.

Selfish feelings robbed two souls
carved in stone from childhood intertwine
Choked our sweet love drape, Passion's lustful cape
cloaked in sorrow as tears feast to dine.

Selfish emotions raged on
careless whispers uttered through long night
Passion's lustful cape, Choked our sweet love drape
smothered breath until out of sight.

Selfish ways destroy persona
yet you made me a stronger lady
Choked our sweet love drape, Passion's lustful cape
found love without Gentleman Shady.

*Dec. 21, 2012


*For Su Crouse  Contest. 

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Skat A March 13, 2014 at 3:19 AM love the passion...... ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A January 15, 2013 at 9:10 AM Linda, my sweet bbf another nice win... , :-) Congratulations in Suzette's " ZaniLa Rhyme - an exiting new contest for the holidays... " contest. Take care... PD

Sara Kendrick January 13, 2013 at 1:23 PM Great winning work..Congrats on your top win..Sara

Debbie Guzzi January 12, 2013 at 6:46 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Seren Roberts January 12, 2013 at 5:53 PM Lovely words Linda......Seren

Audrey Haick January 12, 2013 at 5:05 PM Congratulations on your wonderful win, Linda! Love, Annalise

Tim Ryerson January 12, 2013 at 4:27 PM I have to agree with Carrie...you are Poetry Soup's lady of passion...congratulations are definitely in order and I hope you are feeling better - Tim

Carrie Richards January 12, 2013 at 2:33 PM Passion is your speciality!! Congratulations once again....hope you are doing better!

James Nichols January 12, 2013 at 2:06 PM wow, this is like "you oughta know..." very well-done. Hell hath no fury...

Joyce Johnson January 12, 2013 at 11:47 AM It is so sad when love is betrayed. Congratulations on yur win. Hoping to hear how you are doing. Love, Joyce

Skat A January 12, 2013 at 11:35 AM Linda-Marie~ lovely. SKAT

Debra Squyres January 12, 2013 at 10:33 AM Passion wins most times, not always with good rewards. I really enjoyed reading your poem...well thought out. I see congrats are also in order, so Congratulations on your winning spot in the contest. Well done !!

Richard Lamoureux January 12, 2013 at 9:38 AM Way to go, congratulations on well deserved win.

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl January 12, 2013 at 7:42 AM Congratulations on you winning spot Linda xx

Olusegun Arowolo January 12, 2013 at 6:32 AM Congratulations on your superb win in this contest,Linda-Marie..Great write...Thumb up for you,Friend...XOXO..

Poet Destroyer A November 21, 2012 at 7:25 PM Hello, Linda my bff,, love the dodoitsu,,, thank you for the kind comment in my poem,, you are 2 sweet... xox~pd

Andrea Dietrich November 13, 2012 at 11:03 PM this is a very worthy topic to discuss in a dodoitsu such as this one, Linda. I really enjoyed reading this one especially with that stuff coming up for me in maybe 8 years. (if I still am eligible for social security stuff by then) I'm so sorry for all your problems, dear. are you asking TPS really nicely and explaining the exact problem? Do you use explorer? If so, stop it right away and change to google chrome. I had problems before using chrome. Luv, Andrea

Russell Sivey November 13, 2012 at 12:10 AM I think this is a splendid entry into Debbie's contest my friend! I really enjoyed reading this far superior and very masterfully written poem this evening! What a powerful and extremely real piece Linda-Marie, Great Work!!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 12, 2012 at 10:22 PM WE VISIT MANY SENIOR FACILITIES ESPECIALLY DURING HOLIDAY SEASON AND MANY QUESTION THOSE GOLDEN YEARS AS THEY SIT AND WAIT FOR DEATH .. SOME SICKLY BUT OTHERS SIMPLY DEPRESSED ON LIFE' OUTCOME ..SO MY THOUGHTS POETS ..LUV ..