Kristin Reynolds Poet Lanterne

Passionate Pink Crocus -- Sequence

pink
nose peeks
prettily
through her worn, white
sheet.
bold
Crocus,
breathing wind,
and the promise
of
new
green grass –
painting her
thawing landscape
pink.




*Inspired by Mr. Brian Strand's new Lanterne, as is moment, Contest. :)

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April 30, 2009 at 12:46 PM Congratulations on your first place finish! I knew this was a winner the first time I read it. Wonderful use of imagery! Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Keep up the good writing! Karen

Laura Mckenzie January 18, 2009 at 9:35 AM Kirstin Congratulations on your wonderful first place win!! Excellent write! Love Laura :)

John Heck January 18, 2009 at 9:00 AM Dear Kristin - Congratulations on your WIN in Brian's contest! Peace and hugs, J

Elaine George January 17, 2009 at 3:49 PM Dear Kristen, Congrulations on your first place win. Truly and amazing lanterne. Very beautiful an vivid. You are a master of all forms. Love and peace, Lainie

Constance La France January 17, 2009 at 12:40 PM congratulations on your first place win.. constance

Sharon Winter January 17, 2009 at 11:31 AM This was AWESOME and a well deserved First Place win! Congratulations Kristin! YAY!!!! Love, Shar xoxo

Robin L. Gass January 17, 2009 at 7:29 AM A well deserved 1st place win for this awesome piece of poetry, Kristen. Sorry I missed it before. You paint such a beautiful picture of the comming spring here. Congratulations! Love, Robin

Carrie Richards January 17, 2009 at 6:16 AM What a gorgeous poem. I missed it before ...can see how it won Brian's contest!!!! Congratulations....outstanding beauty with this lovely lanterne~ :) Love Carrie

Brian Strand January 17, 2009 at 3:00 AM Congrats on your success in my contest Kristin.My Sonnet contest is now open.Rgds Brian Do I send your prize to the address I have on file?

January 10, 2009 at 10:53 AM Nice use of imagery in this one. Sure to make the winners list. Good job! Thank you for your kind words regarding my poem. Karen

Keith Bickerstaffe January 6, 2009 at 7:33 AM Neat layout! Sweet alliterations and gorgeous imagery... Keith

Sharon Winter January 6, 2009 at 6:32 AM Wow. Missed this incredibly beautiful tease of Spring! A glorious visual! Breathtaking Kristin. Love, Shar

Sean Kelly January 5, 2009 at 8:17 AM Spring is in the " Reynolds " air .... Hope it flowers for you , in the contest !! ...

Lucinda Bulger January 5, 2009 at 5:14 AM What a wonderful poem about the lovely flower crocus...great imagery here. loved it! :) Lucinda

Michael Degenhardt January 5, 2009 at 5:12 AM The form is excellent while the visuals are clear and absolutely lovely. A great poem to start the day with. Michael

Christopher Higgins January 5, 2009 at 4:54 AM Beautiful write Kristin.