JC Brul Poet Free verse

Passionate Painting

Here, in my sacred sanctuary,
you stand before me~
a modern Zeus sans everything;
Your skin exudes a musky scent~
enthralling my elusive senses.

Your ember gazes 
erupting volcanic voltage 
that runs through my veins
penetrating my ebony canvas,
as I trace your midriff 
little by little ~
with my paint-dipped fingers.

You're defeating me softly ~
My hands from gentle strokes 
go wild, wilder to wildest
till paints run deep- very deep!  

Hands up! I am drowning!
This battle I know I can't win!

Now I,
I am a captive
of your heavenly fervour~
Lost in the abyss of your spell
my hands glide through your face,
down to your bosom...
paints scatter in sultry silence.

26 June 2020


1ST PLACE
Sensuality
Contest Judged:  7/1/2020 4:41:00 PM
Sponsored by: Silent One

Entered for “All Yours (April 4) Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand

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Janice Canerdy April 5, 2021 at 6:44 AM A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, JCB. Made me blush! LOL! Janice

Aditi Mishra July 5, 2020 at 2:02 PM Back to congratulate you on your win my dear. Keep writing and inspiring. Blessings and love :)

James Fraser July 2, 2020 at 11:31 AM Ones mind simmers beautifully when reading your write JCB, alluring the mind of the readers to capture the scene seen through thoughts of Mmm, nice, meaning, a big well done on your placing, James :)

Vijay Pandit July 2, 2020 at 7:00 AM Back with BIG congrats on your TOP win, JCB.

Silent One July 1, 2020 at 4:46 PM That is a very sensual sacred sanctuary...... A beautiful sensual poem... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..

Evelyn Judy Buehler June 27, 2020 at 10:41 PM Beautiful and vivid, with awesome imagery.

Arturo Michael June 26, 2020 at 2:29 PM The love we make on the canvas of life...Well done here...

Vijay Pandit June 26, 2020 at 9:04 AM Much depth of emotions in this write--so well done, JCB!

Aditi Mishra June 26, 2020 at 8:38 AM An absolutely stunning muse from your pen! It flows in a rhythm and drowns me in passion. Best wishes and much love to you :) Keep writing and inspiring JC Brul June 26, 2020 at 10:00 PM Thank dear Aditi for your inspiring words..