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Passionate Kiss

Morning light wears a softer hue, embracing wet leaves, glistening in the sun. Thick grass brings a caressing warmth, to our feet, as we travel gentle slopes, to farthest hills, as lovers do. Our palms closed tight like oyster shells, covering rare pearls, as we watch pastel red skies turn a velvet blue If I were a bird I would glide above you, dipping my wing each time you smiled, allowing love's fragrance to fill our lungs, until they burst, releasing butterflies to the world, like a thousand tiny finger paintings, surrounding the innocence of love, that comes when two mouths melt in silence. 9/1/14

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Date: 3/30/2022 12:52:00 AM
"Our palms closed tight like oyster shells" - Great comparison. "when two mouths melt in silence" - Beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/12/2017 9:52:00 PM
Frederic, fabulous and the imagery is beautiful, congratulations on your win ~*
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Date: 7/11/2017 5:56:00 AM
You have such a way with words Frederick. ..beautiful poem thank you
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Date: 7/10/2017 10:59:00 AM
Wonderfully romantic write Frederick, worthy winner!
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Date: 7/10/2017 8:17:00 AM
Each image bursting with beauty! Congrats, Frederic!
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Date: 9/12/2014 10:19:00 PM
Gosh, this is the most gorgeous poem I have seen ALL night. Gotta FAVE It!!!
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Date: 9/1/2014 2:27:00 PM
This is grrreat!!! Frederick, I would love to talk to your wife (if you have one); are you this eloquently passionate with her?
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Date: 9/1/2014 12:35:00 PM
Oh gosh! Im in love! with your poem..lol.This is lovely...you are such a romantic. BG
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Date: 9/1/2014 11:47:00 AM
- Truly a "Passionate kiss", Frederic !!! - Beautifully my friend ! - "A Heart of strawberries ..... Sugar and cream .... " - I come to you with my new poem ... oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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