Eileen Manassian Poet Quatrain

Passion Unfurled

I must try to be coy
I must be demure	
Traits of a “good girl”
Oh, but what is the cure?

He’s driving me wild
I’m starting to melt
Oh heavens, oh me
How good his kiss felt

I’m going to die
I’m feeling so faint
My deep craving pounds
Does he think I’m a saint?

I wish he would hurry
I simply can’t wait
My burning hunger
He MUST satiate

HE started this madness
HE set me on fire
And now HE lingers
While I burn with desire

The permission he seeks
Is there in my eyes
My patience wears thin
Passion melts my disguise

I see his eyes linger
On my cherry lips
They take in the curve
Of voluptuous hips

I move in closer
Shaken by the thrill
But if it takes too long
I’ll go in for the kill

My need relentless
I must take a dare
Undoing each clasp
My breasts now lie bare

This is my moment
His passion unfurls
I’ll end on this note
I’m one happy girl!  

September 6, 2013
Dr Ram's Contest
Passion over Patience

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Shadow Hamilton September 8, 2013 at 2:12 PM excellent love it GL in contest Shadow x smile Eileen Manassian September 10, 2013 at 12:53 AM :) Thanks, Shadow! Kind of you! Hugs

Laura Breidenthal September 8, 2013 at 12:04 AM Wow! Great one! The title drew me in, and I couldn't get out even if I wanted to! Very awesome one Eileen. :) Always, Laura Eileen Manassian September 10, 2013 at 12:52 AM WOW! If that isn't the sweetest compliment ever! THAT is the goal of writing! Thank you! I will share this with my students in writing class! HUGS!

Delysia Hendricks September 7, 2013 at 12:31 PM Attagirl, Queen of Passion. You've nailed this one real good. Hey, good luck in the contest with this strong entry. Kudos, Happy Girl. Licia (*__*) Eileen Manassian September 7, 2013 at 12:58 PM I'm mad at you!!!! You've been MIA for some time, my dear...How dare you! Thanks for the visit. Queen of Passion...who would have thought! Nailed it, eh? Hmmmmm...HA HA HA...Never mind...won't go there. The happy girl in the poem thanks you! Yes...glad to know I've got the POWER! :)

Charmaine Chircop September 7, 2013 at 12:25 PM Passion unfurled..Passion over patience and you expressed fire so well..Outstanding poem lady.. Eileen Manassian September 7, 2013 at 12:27 PM Thanks, my sweet! I always love your visits....

Richard D Seal September 6, 2013 at 5:52 PM Subtlety and patience not being your middle names my little Desert Orchid,make this contest perfect for you lol. Your poem is excellent and right on the button. Take care, Richard Eileen Manassian September 7, 2013 at 12:28 PM I'm VERY low on patience. I had a pin I'd wear..."Lord give me patience...RIGHT NOW!" Yea...That's me...Yea...more of an open book type...That's me. About contests...whatever! Que Sera sera! What will be, will be. thanks for your post, Richard.

Richard Lamoureux September 6, 2013 at 5:39 PM Ha ha, it sounds like he should be happy as well. Eileen Manassian September 7, 2013 at 12:47 PM Hmmmmmmmm.....If I'm writing the scenario, or sure....YES! :) Eileen Manassian September 7, 2013 at 12:47 PM Drats...THAT WAS FOR SURE!

Jack Ellison September 6, 2013 at 5:31 PM I must admonish you my dear Eileen! I KNOW the contest is entitled "Passion Over Patience" but I'm an old guy, not sure how strong my old ticker is! Maybe if you write something like this again, you need to warn us, NOT FOR YOUNGSTERS OR HORNY OLD GEEZERS! Guess you're sleeping away at the moment but had to get this off my chest! LOL Hugs, sweet lady... Kenny xoxoxox Laura Breidenthal September 8, 2013 at 12:03 AM HAHAHAHAH :D Jack Ellison September 7, 2013 at 1:40 PM Yee haw! "I like older men" But there's older and then there's ancient... I fit into the second category I'm afraid! LOL But you've made my heart go all a-flutter! Big huggeroonies my dear sweet Miss Boop! xoxox Eileen Manassian September 7, 2013 at 12:50 PM Kenny...You are a sweetie pie and I won't have you disparage yourself....YOU ARE NOT AN OLD GEEZER...the other bit...Now I wouldn't know! ;) I'm sure your ticker is JUST FINE, my dear! By the way...EVERYONE who knows me knows I like older men! :) They just have that wonderful quality of being absolutely AMAZING! HUGS!

Liam Mcdaid September 6, 2013 at 3:45 PM A VERY ENJOYABLE AND BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITING Eileen Manassian September 7, 2013 at 12:54 PM Why thank you, Liam...Glad to have this visit from you. Will check you out soon! :)

Nette Onclaud September 6, 2013 at 1:09 PM ohhh, subtle seducution makes me drool, eileen... enticing, intense work that really pulls me in... :) huggs Eileen Manassian September 7, 2013 at 12:56 PM Sorry, Nette...I'm not well today, so my brain is sabotaging all my posts! Yes...glad you could connect with this...At one point I thought it was just turning out to be silly and funny instead of seductive....Yea...to move things along...Hit 'em with your best shot! ;) Thanks for the visit and continued support. Eileen Manassian September 7, 2013 at 12:53 PM I know...once that DAMN comes around...I KNOW I'm on the money! :) Thanks, Becca. I must say...patience isn't a virtue I posses...So, this contest was just up my alley...in this area, no less! ;) Thanks or the visit!

Poet Tacito September 6, 2013 at 9:40 AM Holy damn, this was.....deep. Great declaration! Your "subtleties" know no bounds. ;-) Eileen Manassian September 6, 2013 at 10:11 AM OH DRAKE!!! You are so so sweet! ;) I tried to be subtle...but...there was no other way to get the guy to MAKE A MOVE!!! HA HA! :) Thanks!