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From the sea's froth emerges a woman for whom men are toys in her lusty games. As lovely as sea's finest pearl, she is of water, but her passion is that of fire; it burns with love or with rage; she is Aphrodite. Jan. 5, 2019 for the Fibonacci Contest of Dear Heart

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John Watt

Date: 2/13/2020 6:16:00 PM

Was this the one you were trying to think of? It's very nice use of the form.

John Watt
Date: 2/13/2020 9:16:00 PM

Ha, at least you didn't rhyme Aphrodite with tighty whity!

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/13/2020 7:42:00 PM

no. this is not one of my best either haha.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/4/2019 11:10:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work in Brian's contest. Sara

Andrew Fairchild

Date: 1/20/2019 2:34:00 PM

Reminds me of Botticelli's 'Birth of Venus' - you have painted with words, as well as he did with paint, the image of this fierce and fiery goddess, the first of the gods in the Greek pantheon.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/15/2019 6:39:00 PM

Woo Hoo ! Wow Andrea. a Fabulous Fibonacci ! A numero uno in my book. A picturesque and powerful work of words.

Joseph May

Date: 1/13/2019 6:37:00 AM

Beautiful write Andrea...Congrats on your win..

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/12/2019 4:41:00 PM

Charmingly romantic Fibonacci, Andrea, and a worthy winner - congrats and blessings, my friend! :-) <3

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/12/2019 1:34:00 PM

Lovely, Andrea. Congrats on your top win.

Constance La France

Date: 1/12/2019 1:23:00 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing Fibonacci and I love that image too ~

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/12/2019 1:20:00 PM

Hi Jan, I knew this was a winner.Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Ann Gilmour

Date: 1/12/2019 12:19:00 PM

Wow, congratulations Andrea on your exquisite poem, and your first place win. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/12/2019 11:37:00 AM

Stopping back with big congratulations on your first-place win, Andrea! Hugs, Carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/8/2019 3:20:00 PM

From what I hear, there are still women with some of the same qualities of Aphrodite. Very creative fibonacci, Andrea. Best wishes in Dear Heart's contest! Hugs, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/7/2019 7:02:00 AM

Interesting one. Not up on the mythological gods and goddesses. Thanks for dropping by and for the information. Sara

Vladislav Raven

Date: 1/6/2019 2:50:00 PM

Hi Andrea, this is such a beautiful write. Your portrait of Aphrodite is wonderful. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. I can only say, it reads like a winner to me. Aphrodite walks from the sea again, you give the goddess life. A fave. Have a wonderful Sunday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/6/2019 1:51:00 PM

- The last line is finished :) ... and it sounds beautiful, Andrea :) - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/6/2019 7:30:00 AM

Multi talented she is! You painted the portrait of this goddess well Andrea.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/6/2019 2:11:00 AM

I am on sale now at Toys R Us 50% off, just saying! LOL loved this poem.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/6/2019 3:38:00 PM

you made me almost LOL here, which is not good because I am doing oil pulling right now and swishing coconut oil in my mouth!!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/6/2019 1:42:00 AM

Well written Andrea, as always you deliver fine verse. Good luck in the contest. Tom.

Carole Duet

Date: 1/5/2019 11:59:00 PM

This is so great, Andrea. Such a fun read. Good luck in the contest...(as if you need luck...lol)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/5/2019 11:46:00 PM

Andrea, amazing, poetically charming and a sure win! Good luck my friend, who better than Aphrodite! Love and poetry wishes Jenny.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/5/2019 11:33:00 PM

WoW! Andrea, You've met the challenge and then some. Nice rhythm and flow. I think you've penned yourself a winner. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Happy New Year's as well:-) Alexis