Passion Explored

Passion enhanced his red face.
Because of her long embrace.
She knew she had won the race.
Because of his pace.


For Francine Roberts "Red" contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Haick Avatar
February 2, 2011 at 9:22 AM
Best of luck in Francine's "Red" contest, JAM. Love, Annalise
Kendrick Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 4:25 PM
Good luck in the contest with this good work..Sara
Mehta Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 2:14 PM
Enjoyed a very passionate write , Jummy
Pettit Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 2:02 PM
Good descriptive wording while the rhyming added another dimension to the work.
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