Passion By Candlelight

My love shines infinite and bright
as we bask in the candlelight.
A flame of passion does ignite;
our souls entwining feels so right.
Candle sizzles in the night
as we encompass our delight.


By Deb Wilson
for contest"By Candlelight"
sponsored by Russel Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Horsman Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 5:38 PM
i'm late, but congrats on this wonderful winner. harry
Brown Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 7:54 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Russell's "By Candlelight" contest Deb. Love,Carol
Macfarlane Avatar
March 12, 2012 at 5:23 AM
Congrats on a passionate and sizzling write!
Merryman Avatar
March 11, 2012 at 5:16 PM
Congrats on your 1st place win with this hot and steamy write, Deb! Love, KIm
Mason Gibbs Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 9:32 PM
i like this poem, short and sweet. good job.
Arno Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 6:05 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win! Jon
Johnson Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 11:21 AM
Congratulations Deb. Great entry. Love, Joyce
Poet Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 10:27 AM
Good passionate lines here Deb.Congrats on your win.
Phookan Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 10:04 AM
Congrats on your superb win in this contest with this enchanting write!! love...
Phookan Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 10:17 AM
soup mail your way...
Prabhu Avatar
March 10, 2012 at 6:01 AM
gr8 write Deb....congrats on the top placement........~sashi
Richards Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 7:13 PM
Such lovely and romantic feelings expressed in your wonderful winning poem! Congratulations, dear Deb!!
Sweetheart Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 6:11 PM
congrats Deb on an exciting first place win for lovely expression of candlelight luv.. luv..
Taylor Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 5:57 PM
Congrats, Deb. Awesome, well desreved win. Great job, nice going. You and yours have a great weekend. Don't forget to Spring Ahead. luv and hugs, Ralph
Butterfly Avatar
March 9, 2012 at 3:06 AM
Your Monorhyme is wonderful Deb. Best of luck with it. I want to thank you for honouring my poem in your My Passion Contest. I am very happy.
Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 10:51 PM
way to do the contest, Deb. I really need to hurry and try this one out myself. I enjoy how you took a romantic approach!!
A   Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 10:02 PM
DEB, i like the image of basking by the candle light.. lol... can you imagine a slight tan of passion... some romance but, deeper..enjoyed your poem~ have a great night*ALWAY ;-) PD
Andresen Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 1:41 PM
Sweet and romantick poem Deb, luck in contest. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Onclaud Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 1:22 PM
gracefully done with delightful word scenes, deb.. wishing you success with hugggs! :)
Tacito Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 6:24 AM
Smooth flow here. The way it should be. Terrific lines, Deb.
Poet Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 5:02 AM
Very romantic lines here Deb.Best wishes.
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