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Passion Awaiting

There was a glow surrounding her is she in love, who can it be. Her smile suggests inner mayhem, A secret, held within her heart Is she in love who, can it be maybe she doesn't know herself. A secret held within her heart Waits for some one to arouse her passion. Maybe she doesn't know herself A dream perhaps tempted her, now she Waits for some one to arouse her passion, Her lips quiver for their release. A dream perhaps tempted her, now she's Longing for a lover arms to enfold her, Her lips quiver for their release, Tension furrows her brows. Longing for a !overs arms to enfold her, Tension furrows her brow. Her smile suggests inner mayhem, There was a glow surrounding her. penned october 1st 2017

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Date: 10/10/2017 11:13:00 PM
Such a romantic write Seren, loved it!
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Date: 10/4/2017 5:48:00 AM
Wow, this is a very good Pantoum! This form is very complicated to write with! You have to be careful how your lines work together! I love how you changed the mood of your poem without a flaw! You have delighted me to no end with this illustrious write this morning my friend! Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/4/2017 12:55:00 PM
Hi Russell it's a form you have to think about but ok to write....glad you enjoyed.... Seren
Date: 10/3/2017 1:48:00 PM
Never let go of your dreams...your poem is aglow
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Date: 10/4/2017 12:56:00 PM
Never will Tim thanks for commenting....Seren

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