Passion Awaiting

There was a glow surrounding her
is she in love, who can it be.
Her smile suggests inner mayhem,
A secret, held within her heart

Is she in love who, can it be    
maybe she doesn't know herself.
A secret held within her heart
Waits for some one to arouse her passion.
 

Maybe she doesn't know herself
A dream perhaps tempted her, now she
Waits for some one to arouse her passion,
Her lips quiver for their release.

A dream perhaps tempted her, now she's
Longing for a lover arms to enfold her,
Her lips quiver for their release,
Tension furrows her brows.

Longing for a !overs arms to enfold her,
Tension furrows her brow.
Her smile suggests inner mayhem,
There was a glow surrounding her.



penned october 1st 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017


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Date: 10/10/2017 11:13:00 PM
Such a romantic write Seren, loved it!
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Date: 10/4/2017 5:48:00 AM
Wow, this is a very good Pantoum! This form is very complicated to write with! You have to be careful how your lines work together! I love how you changed the mood of your poem without a flaw! You have delighted me to no end with this illustrious write this morning my friend! Great Work!!
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Date: 10/4/2017 12:55:00 PM
Hi Russell it's a form you have to think about but ok to write....glad you enjoyed.... Seren
Date: 10/3/2017 1:48:00 PM
Never let go of your dreams...your poem is aglow
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Date: 10/4/2017 12:56:00 PM
Never will Tim thanks for commenting....Seren
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