Passion

Three
small words
brought us close;
unified with
two.

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(C) John C Michaels, May 2017

devotionengagementlovemarriagepassionlanterne

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Susan Ashley

November 18, 2017 at 7:25 PM

Ohh I love this John! What a compelling and beautiful write this is. Brilliant in your expression and so lovingly romantic... excellent and enjoyed!

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 10, 2017 at 2:00 PM

- Three words we should use - Beautiful, John :) - a 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Michaels

May 13, 2017 at 3:42 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! Glad you liked it! Regards, John.

Pandita Sietesantos

May 10, 2017 at 8:25 AM

Love this Lanterne - so witty and loving! I certainly have to try this form. Kindest regards. Pandita

John Michaels

May 13, 2017 at 3:41 AM

Thank you for your kind comments, Pandita. Yes, I can thoroughly recommend giving this form a try! All the best. Regards, John.

Jan Allison

May 9, 2017 at 6:09 PM

How clever is this John!!!! Let's hope our love lasts a lfetime:-) added to my faves ! hugs Jan xx

John Michaels

May 10, 2017 at 2:30 AM

Thank you for your supportive comments, Jan. Am so pleased you liked it. Regards, John.

Joseph May

May 9, 2017 at 4:34 PM

Very nicely done John

John Michaels

May 10, 2017 at 2:29 AM

Thank you for your kind comments, Joseph. Regards, John.

Lisa Ricci

May 7, 2017 at 2:52 PM

Hello John. This is gently and sweetly and yes eloquently said and phrased. May there always be love and passion. Beautiful work with the Lanterne. I love that format. Well done

John Michaels

May 7, 2017 at 4:33 PM

Thank you for your kind and supportive comments... Yes, the Lanterne is swiftly becoming a favourite of mine! Regards, John.

Paul Callus

May 6, 2017 at 3:10 PM

Those three words, when expressed sincerely and passionately, have the power to take love to great heights! Full marks to you, John. ~ Regards // paul

John Michaels

May 7, 2017 at 2:00 PM

Thank you for your words of support, Paul; as always, are greatly appreciated. Regards, John.

Eve Roper

May 6, 2017 at 2:20 PM

very nicely done, John, eternal love

John Michaels

May 7, 2017 at 1:56 PM

Thank you for your kind comments, Eve. Regards, John.

Andrea Dietrich

May 6, 2017 at 11:58 AM

wow, this is awesome, short AND sweet, John!

John Michaels

May 6, 2017 at 12:18 PM

Thanks, Andrea. I'm really getting into this form and am working my way through the various moods / emotions... who knows, some more may make their way onto here :) !! Thanks for your comments. Regards, John.

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