Passing of Time

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comes another season i don't know what to make of it time flies while at a standstill feeling empty living this illusion i feel you near yet cannot touch you AP: Honorable Mention 2021, Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on October 13, 2021

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/15/2021 11:02:00 AM

This poem is so melancholy beautiful, Line. It leaves a haunting, whispering echo. Exquisite shine poetry! Love and more love always.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/15/2021 4:32:00 PM

Thank you very much, Freddie ~

Lisa Ricci

Date: 10/14/2021 9:28:00 AM

I turned to this entry do to its title. I found the emotion and feeling to match the scene and the mindset of anyone thinking of and missing a loved one. Well expressed and executed. Thank you for sharing.

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/15/2021 6:15:00 AM

Thank you very much, Lisa ~

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/14/2021 5:24:00 AM

Creative lines penned in this one. I enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for reading and considering my work in your contest. Sara

Line Gauthier
Date: 10/15/2021 6:15:00 AM

Thank you very much, Sara ~