Line Gauthier Poet Free verse

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Passing of Time

comes another season
i don't know what to make of it
time flies while at a standstill
feeling empty living this illusion
i feel you near yet cannot touch you



AP: Honorable Mention 2021, Honorable Mention 2021

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Freddie Robinson Jr. October 15, 2021 at 11:02 AM This poem is so melancholy beautiful, Line. It leaves a haunting, whispering echo. Exquisite shine poetry! Love and more love always. Line Gauthier October 15, 2021 at 4:32 PM Thank you very much, Freddie ~

Lisa Ricci October 14, 2021 at 9:28 AM I turned to this entry do to its title. I found the emotion and feeling to match the scene and the mindset of anyone thinking of and missing a loved one. Well expressed and executed. Thank you for sharing. Line Gauthier October 15, 2021 at 6:15 AM Thank you very much, Lisa ~

Sara Kendrick October 14, 2021 at 5:24 AM Creative lines penned in this one. I enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for reading and considering my work in your contest. Sara Line Gauthier October 15, 2021 at 6:15 AM Thank you very much, Sara ~