Passing Acquaintance

Out of the corner of my eye, 
an ex-colleague from bygone years spotted, 
walking in my direction, 
one in too many faces 
on a busy street now, 
in a big office then. 

What’s his name? 
One of those people you know but don’t know. 

I look away, but not before I catch him looking away, 
and the flicker of recognition, the little blip of nonplus
on his face, mirroring my own, no doubt. 

We are barely 15 feet apart, and closing fast. 
Decision. 

Stop, greet, 
spew pleasantries,
inquire into the health and general well-being
of assorted family members,  
talk the small talk, 
two men stranded in the middle of the sidewalk
by the rules of civility.
Natter, chatter, patter, 
“Have you seen so-and-so lately?”, 
“No, not for a while ...”, 
invoking random names to hide the paucity
of viable conversational material,
waiting for that natural lull 
in the banter to extricate themselves
politely-obviously-eagerly, 
finally concluding with the obligatory bald lies 
about running late 
and catching up over a beer 
at an unspecified time in the future. 

Or just walk on by, 
alibied by the bustle on the street
and a suitably distracted expression.  

8 feet, 7, 6, 5, 4 . . .

I keep walking, 
eyes resolutely averted,
feigning a sudden haste,  
with a slight frown acting 
as a Do Not Disturb sign.

He must have made the 
same simultaneous decision, 
my progress being unchecked.

Spared by each other through 
mute, mutual consent!  

A few more strides,
and I’m released 
back into the anonymity of the crowd, 
my mouth silently whew-shaped 
after passing what’s-his-name?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/7/2017 8:14:00 PM
Oh I love this write Bernard! Your magnified thought process really brought dramatic intensity to the situation. Every line is as important and as awesome as the next, but I especially loved; 'Spared by each other through mute, mutual consent!' Poetic genius my friend! :)
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Date: 9/7/2017 11:24:00 PM
Thank you so much, Susan! Glad you liked it and really appreciate your insightful comments. I'm not always in the mood to socialize without advance notice, so this scenario has happened a couple of times over the last 2 years :))
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