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Passers-By

Latte in a paper cup and cigarette in hand define me while I sit and peruse the passers-by on a busy side walk. On the street engines groan like Big Game I want to shoot as they pass the passers-by. Instead I am the Game and a tourist is the hunter with her Iphone Camera trained on me! I try to hide ; cornered I am snared, click goes her weapon and I am shot! Enraged at her cheek! She smiles at me and motions With her lips ‘thank you’ and disappears into the side-walk rumble ; lost to the passers-by.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/19/2013 8:34:00 PM
long time no see, David. Do you remember your poem Beat out the Rhythm? I sure would like to see it in my current Faves contest. All you have to do is submit it and it's on the list for all to see.
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Date: 7/4/2010 12:29:00 PM
David I certainly hope u entered this in Joe's poems that do not rhyme contest as this one is so divine a piece.. contest closed now ..very fast but this was perfect ...if u did ..good luck.. I just got an HM for Passengers.. we ARE on the same wave length.. lava and passers by passengers.. WoW.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" ..AlohA
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Date: 7/1/2010 1:00:00 PM
lovely poem,im still smiling. .C
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Date: 6/30/2010 3:00:00 PM
These new fangled electronic gadgets - confound 'em! Good write! Love, daver
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Date: 6/30/2010 6:57:00 AM
This tourist had some nerve taking your photo without your consent, David. I think we have laws against this in the states. I would have been enraged by her audacity as well. Excellent poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/29/2010 10:23:00 PM
Easy to imagine the whole scene, David. Well done and fun to read. Thanks for your comments on my latest. It is not just romance though, I'd do the same for my children and my friends. Caroline.
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Date: 6/29/2010 10:09:00 PM
well, you must look quite IRish for the tourists to be taking your picture like that. Is this the five min. poem. Wow, you did amazingly well then!! well, this is IT. FINITO. OUTTA HERE am I. See ya later. hasta la vista. Andrea
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Date: 6/29/2010 9:15:00 PM
A wonderful poem full of humors and wit
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Date: 6/29/2010 8:18:00 PM
Very humerous.
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