Passers-By

Latte in a paper cup
and cigarette in hand
define me while I sit
and peruse the passers-by
on a busy side walk.

On the street engines groan
like Big Game I want to shoot
as they pass the passers-by.

Instead I am the Game and 
a tourist is the hunter with her 
Iphone Camera trained
on me!

I try to hide ; cornered I am
snared, click goes her weapon
and I am shot! Enraged at her
cheek!

She smiles at me and motions
With her lips ‘thank you’ and 
disappears into the side-walk
rumble ; lost to the passers-by.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/19/2013 8:34:00 PM
long time no see, David. Do you remember your poem Beat out the Rhythm? I sure would like to see it in my current Faves contest. All you have to do is submit it and it's on the list for all to see.
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Date: 7/4/2010 12:29:00 PM
David I certainly hope u entered this in Joe's poems that do not rhyme contest as this one is so divine a piece.. contest closed now ..very fast but this was perfect ...if u did ..good luck.. I just got an HM for Passengers.. we ARE on the same wave length.. lava and passers by passengers.. WoW.. with luv from the "Sweetheart" ..AlohA
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Date: 7/1/2010 1:00:00 PM
lovely poem,im still smiling. .C
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Date: 6/30/2010 3:00:00 PM
These new fangled electronic gadgets - confound 'em! Good write! Love, daver
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Date: 6/30/2010 6:57:00 AM
This tourist had some nerve taking your photo without your consent, David. I think we have laws against this in the states. I would have been enraged by her audacity as well. Excellent poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/29/2010 10:23:00 PM
Easy to imagine the whole scene, David. Well done and fun to read. Thanks for your comments on my latest. It is not just romance though, I'd do the same for my children and my friends. Caroline.
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Date: 6/29/2010 10:09:00 PM
well, you must look quite IRish for the tourists to be taking your picture like that. Is this the five min. poem. Wow, you did amazingly well then!! well, this is IT. FINITO. OUTTA HERE am I. See ya later. hasta la vista. Andrea
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Date: 6/29/2010 9:15:00 PM
A wonderful poem full of humors and wit
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Date: 6/29/2010 8:18:00 PM
Very humerous.
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