Passengers

A froth of snow crusts the ground,
fixing in place the remaining blades of green grass
and outlining the metal edges of stop signs.
The road weaves wearily through the
freshly white washed landscape
with its distant, dusted, granite outcroppings.
Fellow travelers in blanketed cars whoosh passed
chunks of icy snow fly, lambasting the negligent bumper hugger.
Warmed by the wheels spin the asphalt seizes its shivering.
Weighted wires laden and humming unburden themselves
upon frosted windshields with undignified plops
and so the momentary beauty of a winter morn passes.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 12/12/2011 10:59:00 AM
Wow this is indeed an inspiration from your poem. So elegant.
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Date: 12/10/2011 3:15:00 PM
The landscape is lovely and the drive so interesting. Beauty in every season for those of us lucky enough to have all four.
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Date: 12/10/2011 7:03:00 AM
Winter in Norway is cold , but beatiful. Lovly poem.OXOX Anne-Lise
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Date: 12/9/2011 10:52:00 PM
Yes, it sure passes quickly, doesn't it, Debs? Love that line "undignified plops!" So well put.
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Date: 12/9/2011 8:58:00 AM
And from those of us in the refinish paint business, please drive carefully but if you don't, remeber high quality BASF products.
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Date: 12/9/2011 8:54:00 AM
Keep writing and sharing your amazing poetry and I will keep reading and enjoying it Debbie. Love, Carol
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